T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: I wear T-shirts daily because they are comfortable and affordable. Since they are cheap, almost anyone can afford them, which makes them a practical choice for me.

提案: Avoid repeating the same words unnecessarily and combine your ideas into coherent sentences using linking words. Also, correct grammatical errors to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. Moreover, they are affordable, which suits my budget well.

提案: Focus on clarity and coherence by structuring your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Linking words will help your answer flow better.

例: I think wearing T-shirts is a personal choice regardless of age. If older people like to wear them, they definitely can, especially since T-shirts are affordable and comfortable.

提案: Make sure your answer is clear and free of confusing phrases. Use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. Provide specific examples that relate directly to the question and complete your sentences.

例: No, I did not usually wear T-shirts as a kid. Instead, I preferred colorful traditional clothes because I found them more interesting and unique. For example, my father once bought me a beautiful traditional outfit that I loved.

× I wear T-shirt daily because of T-shirts are very comfortable and reliable for me as well as it T-shirts are very cheap and I can say anyone can afford the T-shirts.

✓ I wear T-shirts daily because T-shirts are very comfortable and reliable for me, and they are also very cheap. I can say anyone can afford T-shirts.

The sentence incorrectly mixes singular 'T-shirt' with plural 'T-shirts' and uses 'it' incorrectly referring to plural. The subject and verb agreement requires consistent plural form 'T-shirts' and plural pronouns 'they' when referring to multiple items.

× Yes, I often buy T-shirt because they T-shirts are very comfortable and practical. Practical for me and it's also affordable for me.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are very comfortable and practical for me, and they are also affordable for me.

The sentence incorrectly uses singular 'T-shirt' and plural 'T-shirts' inconsistently. Also, 'it's' refers to singular but should be plural 'they' to match 'T-shirts'. Consistent plural form and pronouns are necessary.

× I believe wearing AT shirt, wearing AT shirt is only an individual choice. It it's not depend on the person eat.

✓ I believe wearing a T-shirt is only an individual choice. It does not depend on the person's age.

The phrase 'wearing AT shirt' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing a T-shirt'. Also, 'it it's not depend' is grammatically incorrect; correct form is 'it does not depend'. 'Person eat' is likely a typo for 'person's age'. Proper article usage and verb form are needed.

× So I can see if the person like like if they if the older person like to wear the T-shirt and then definitely they can wear it because it's affordable.

✓ So I can see if the person likes to wear a T-shirt, then definitely they can wear it because it's affordable.

The verb 'like' should be 'likes' to agree with singular subject 'person'. Also, 'the T-shirt' is acceptable but 'a T-shirt' is more natural here. The sentence had repeated words and needed simplification.

× No, I did not usually wear T-shirt when I was kid.

✓ No, I did not usually wear T-shirts when I was a kid.

The plural form 'T-shirts' is appropriate here. Also, 'when I was kid' is missing the article 'a' before 'kid'. The past tense 'did not wear' is correct.

× Instead of eyewear preferred, I prefer wearing colorful traditional clothes and other type of outfit because I found that they are more interesting and unique.

✓ Instead of T-shirts, I preferred wearing colorful traditional clothes and other types of outfits because I found that they are more interesting and unique.

The phrase 'Instead of eyewear preferred' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'Instead of T-shirts, I preferred'. Also, 'other type of outfit' should be plural 'other types of outfits' to match plural subject. The verb tense 'prefer' should be past 'preferred' to match past context.

× For example, when I was a kid, my my father brought me a beautiful beautiful day.

✓ For example, when I was a kid, my father bought me a beautiful doll.

The sentence has repeated words 'my my' and 'beautiful beautiful' which are errors. Also, 'brought me a beautiful beautiful day' is nonsensical; likely intended 'bought me a beautiful doll'. Correct word choice and removal of repetition are needed.