T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repetition. For example, instead of repeating 'wearing T-shirts', you can say 'I often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable, and I reserve shirts for formal occasions.' This will make your answer sound more natural and effective.

例: I often wear T-shirts because they are comfortable, and I reserve shirts for formal occasions.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid minor grammatical errors like 'wide range of T-shirts help me' should be 'a wide range of T-shirts helps me'.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I want to build a diverse collection. This helps me look different every day; for instance, I wear red on Mondays and yellow on Tuesdays.

提案: There are several grammatical errors and unclear phrases in your answer. Try to structure your response clearly with correct grammar. For example, say 'Older people don't usually wear T-shirts; they prefer shirts or blazers in winter because T-shirts are not considered very fashionable among them. Occasionally, they wear T-shirts to match their younger family members.'

例: Older people don't usually wear T-shirts; they prefer shirts or blazers in winter because T-shirts are not considered very fashionable among them. Occasionally, they wear T-shirts to match their younger family members.

提案: Avoid repeating similar phrases like 'since my childhood' and 'when I was a child'. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'Yes, I have been wearing T-shirts since I was a child. My parents often bought me many T-shirts with different designs and colours, which I really liked.'

例: Yes, I have been wearing T-shirts since I was a child. My parents often bought me many T-shirts with different designs and colours, which I really liked.

× Older people don't usually hear T-shirts, they wear shirt are usually Blazers in winters because in my country they are not very fashionable.

✓ Older people don't usually wear T-shirts; they usually wear shirts or blazers in winters because in my country they are not very fashionable.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'hear' instead of 'wear' and has a confusing structure. Also, 'shirt are usually Blazers' is grammatically incorrect. The correction replaces 'hear' with 'wear', fixes the plural form 'shirts', and clarifies the sentence structure for better understanding.

× But I rarely they match the wives of youngsters and wear T-shirts when are forced to do that.

✓ But rarely do they match the wives of youngsters and wear T-shirts when they are forced to do so.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing pronouns, making it unclear. The correction adjusts the word order to form a proper negative adverbial inversion and adds the missing pronouns 'they' and 'so' for clarity.