T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在较多语法错误和用词不当，且表达不够清晰。建议加强语法基础，注意单词拼写和搭配，避免重复和冗余。回答时应直接回应问题，简洁明了。

例: I wear T-shirts every day because my major is invitation technology, and our school requires us to wear T-shirts to attend classes.

提案: 回答中语法和词汇错误较多，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的句子结构和词汇用法，避免混淆单词。回答应简洁明了，直接回答问题。

例: No, I don't often buy T-shirts because the school provides them, and we have to wear the official style without changes.

提案: 回答中存在严重语法错误和词汇使用错误，表达不流畅。建议加强语法和词汇学习，注意主谓一致和时态使用。回答时应使用连贯的句子表达观点。

例: In my opinion, T-shirts are more suitable for older people. Older people prefer to wear T-shirts, while young people nowadays dislike them because they think T-shirts are plain and unfashionable.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议注意时态和主谓一致，避免重复。回答应简洁且具体。

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid because my family was poor, and my mother often gave me old T-shirts to wear.

× I wear the teacher actually every day because my major is invitation technology.

✓ I wear the T-shirt actually every day because my major is invitation technology.

这里的'teacher'应为'T-shirt'，是单复数错误，混淆了单词。应使用正确的名词形式。

× So we have rules you must need, you must wear the T-shirt to get the class.

✓ So we have rules: you must wear the T-shirt to attend the class.

'must need'是错误的模态动词用法，'must'已经表示必须，不需要加'need'。另外，'get the class'应改为'attend the class'更合适。

× No, because my teacher is sent by school so I don't need to buy some teachers.

✓ No, because my T-shirt is sent by the school so I don't need to buy any T-shirts.

'teacher'误用，应为'T-shirt'。'some teachers'应为'any T-shirts'，数量词和名词单复数错误。

× And the style of the T-shirts is used by school, so you can't change it by yourself, you must wear the suitable T-shirt so I don't buy.

✓ And the style of the T-shirts is decided by the school, so you can't change it yourself. You must wear the suitable T-shirt, so I don't buy any.

'used by school'用法不当，应为'decided by the school'。'change it by yourself'中'by'多余，应去掉。句子结构需调整使其更通顺。

× In my opinion the teacher is more suitable for old people.

✓ In my opinion, the T-shirt is more suitable for old people.

'teacher'误用，应为'T-shirt'。

× So old people is prefer to wear T-shirt in.

✓ So old people prefer to wear T-shirts.

'old people is'主谓不一致，应为'old people prefer'。'T-shirt'应为复数形式'T-shirts'。句尾'in'多余，应去掉。

× In nowadays young people are hate to wear T-shirt because it's so clean and not fashion.

✓ Nowadays, young people hate to wear T-shirts because they think it's not fashionable and too plain.

'are hate'错误，'hate'为一般现在时动词，不用进行时。'so clean'用词不当，应为'too plain'或类似表达。'not fashion'应为'not fashionable'。

× Yes, mine was a kid.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid.

'mine was a kid'结构错误，应为'when I was a kid'。

× My family is so poor so my mother don't have enough money to buy some new clothes.

✓ My family was so poor that my mother didn't have enough money to buy new clothes.

时态应为过去时，'is'改为'was'。'don't'应为'didn't'。'some new clothes'中'some'可省略或保留，均可。

× They usually choose the old T-shirts for me and I have no choice so I wear the T-shirt when I was a kid usually.

✓ They usually chose old T-shirts for me, and I had no choice, so I usually wore T-shirts when I was a kid.

时态应统一为过去时，'choose'改为'chose'，'have'改为'had'，'wear'改为'wore'。句子结构调整更自然。