T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'pyjamas' instead of 'pyjamas') and avoid redundancy. Also, provide a clearer reason and use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I wear T-shirts every day, especially as comfortable sleepwear, because they are soft and affordable.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, add linking words to connect ideas logically and provide more specific details.

例: No, I don't often buy T-shirts because I already have many at home, which were given to me by my university society.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains incorrect word choices ('teachers' instead of 'T-shirts'). Make sure to use the correct vocabulary and structure your answer clearly. Provide specific reasons and use linking words to explain your points.

例: T-shirts are quite popular among older people in my country because they are comfortable and affordable. Moreover, they are easy to find in most shops.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use the correct past tense and vocabulary, and avoid confusing expressions. Also, provide a clear reason and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts when I was a child because there were fewer dress restrictions, and I could wear whatever made me feel comfortable.

× No, I don't buy T-shirts because I have gotten a lot of T-shirts at my home.

✓ No, I don't buy T-shirts because I have got a lot of T-shirts at my home.

The phrase 'have gotten' is more common in American English, while 'have got' is preferred in British English. Since the context is British English, 'have got' should be used to indicate possession in the present perfect tense.

× Those T-shirts were given by the society in my universities.

✓ Those T-shirts were given by the society in my university.

The word 'universities' is plural, but the context suggests a single university. Also, 'the society' likely refers to a specific group within one university. Therefore, 'university' should be singular to match the intended meaning.

× Teachers have been fashionable in my country for older people because of the comforts and the prize.

✓ T-shirts have been fashionable in my country for older people because of the comfort and the price.

The word 'Teachers' is incorrect here; it should be 'T-shirts' as per the context. Also, 'comforts' should be singular 'comfort' as an uncountable noun, and 'prize' is incorrect; it should be 'price' referring to cost.

× Teachers are easy to buy in my country and they come with usually relatively lower price.

✓ T-shirts are easy to buy in my country and they usually come at a relatively lower price.

The adverbs 'usually' and 'relatively' are misplaced. 'Usually' should come before the verb 'come', and 'relatively' should modify 'lower price'. Also, 'come with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to price.

× Yes, I often want teachers when I was a kid because as a kid there is not many restriction on stress quote and I can wear whatever I liked and made me feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, I often wore T-shirts when I was a kid because, as a kid, there were not many restrictions on dress code and I could wear whatever I liked that made me feel comfortable.

The verb 'want' is incorrect; it should be 'wore' to indicate past action. 'Teachers' should be 'T-shirts'. 'There is' should be 'there were' to match plural 'restrictions' in past tense. 'Restriction' should be plural. 'Stress quote' is a mishearing or typo for 'dress code'. 'Can' should be 'could' for past ability. The phrase 'and made me feel comfortable' should be connected properly to the previous clause.