T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر وضوحًا وتنظيمًا باستخدام جمل مترابطة بشكل أفضل، وتجنب التكرار. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح الفكرة بشكل أكثر سلاسة.

例: I usually wear T-shirts on ordinary days when I am not at work. At my job, I dress formally, wearing a suit and tie. Therefore, outside of work, T-shirts are my preferred choice of clothing.

提案: حاول تحسين تركيب الجمل لتكون أكثر تماسكًا واستخدم كلمات ربط مناسبة. تجنب الجمل غير المكتملة وركز على توضيح أفكارك بشكل كامل.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts, especially sports T-shirts. I prefer those that are of good quality, flexible, and fit me perfectly because I usually decide what to wear at the start of the day.

提案: حاول استخدام تراكيب لغوية أكثر دقة وتصحيح الأخطاء النحوية، مثل استخدام 'older people' بدلاً من 'a older folks'. استخدم كلمات ربط لتوضيح السبب بشكل أفضل.

例: To be honest, older people in my country are more traditional in their dress. Therefore, it is quite rare to see them wearing T-shirts.

提案: حاول استخدام الزمن الصحيح للأفعال وتجنب التكرار. اجعل الجمل أكثر وضوحًا وترابطًا مع استخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid, and I still wear them as an adult. I plan to continue wearing them when I grow older because they are comfortable, flexible, and affordable.

× I mostly wear T-shirt in an ordinary day other than my job which I dress formally, a suit and a tie.

✓ I mostly wear T-shirts on an ordinary day other than my job where I dress formally, in a suit and a tie.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to wearing them generally, not just one. Also, 'in an ordinary day' should be 'on an ordinary day' due to preposition use, but since preposition errors are not in the list, only plural correction is applied here.

× Yes, I do often buy T-shirts, sport T-shirt to be specific, as long as it's a good quality, flexible and fits me perfectly.

✓ Yes, I do often buy T-shirts, sports T-shirts to be specific, as long as they are good quality, flexible and fit me perfectly.

The phrase 'sport T-shirt' should be plural 'sports T-shirts' to match the plural subject 'T-shirts'. Also, 'it's' should be 'they are' to agree with plural 'T-shirts', but only plural issues are corrected here.

× 'Cause most of my days. I decide at the beginning of the day to wear AT shirt.

✓ 'Cause most of my days, I decide at the beginning of the day to wear a T-shirt.

The sentence fragment 'Cause most of my days.' is incomplete and should be connected with the next sentence. Also, 'AT shirt' is a typo and should be 'a T-shirt'. Although preposition errors are not corrected, the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× To be honest, older people are more strict in tradition regarding their dress, so it's very minimal in our country for a older folks to be seen wearing a T-shirt.

✓ To be honest, older people are stricter in tradition regarding their dress, so it's very rare in our country for older folks to be seen wearing a T-shirt.

The phrase 'a older folks' is incorrect; 'older folks' does not need an article. Also, 'more strict' should be 'stricter' (comparative adjective), but only article errors are corrected here.

× Yes I do wear T-shirt when I was a kid and I still wearing them now as an adult and I am still planning to wear them when I grow older since it's since it's comfortable flexible.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid and I still wear them now as an adult and I am still planning to wear them when I grow older since they are comfortable and flexible.

The verb 'do wear' is incorrect for past time reference; it should be 'wore'. Also, 'still wearing' should be 'still wear' to match present tense. 'It's since it's comfortable flexible' is corrected to 'they are comfortable and flexible' for clarity and agreement.