T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了频率和原因，但语法有些错误，且句子结构不够自然。建议注意主谓一致和冠词的使用，同时可以用更自然的表达方式。

例: I often wear T-shirts, especially on weekends or after work, because my company has a strict dress code that requires formal attire during working hours.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如复数形式和冠词使用不当。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。

例: I don't buy T-shirts very often because my company requires formal dress. I usually buy them only when there are big discounts.

提案: 回答不完整，最后一句话未表达完整意思。建议完整表达观点，避免句子残缺，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Nowadays, it is common for elderly people in my country to wear fashionable T-shirts because many of them are becoming more fashion-conscious.

提案: 时态使用不当，应该用过去时。句子衔接不够自然，建议使用连接词并注意时态一致。

例: Yes, of course. When I was a child, I always wore T-shirts, especially when I played with my friends or traveled. I found T-shirts very comfortable and cozy.

× This is because during the work our company have strong dressing code, which means we have to dress formally in order to provide better service to our clients.

✓ This is because during work our company has a strong dressing code, which means we have to dress formally in order to provide better service to our clients.

主语是单数名词短语“our company”，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“has”，而不是“have”。此外，“during the work”应改为“during work”，更符合习惯表达。

× Not that often because our company has a stricter dressing code which requires us to dress formally in order to create a professional images.

✓ Not that often because our company has a stricter dressing code which requires us to dress formally in order to create professional images.

“images”前的冠词“a”不应出现，因为“images”是复数名词，复数名词前不加不定冠词。

× I believe there are lots of elderly people are more fashion conscious, so they tend to wear T-shirts with.

✓ I believe there are lots of elderly people who are more fashion conscious, so they tend to wear T-shirts.

句中“there are lots of elderly people are”结构重复，应在“people”后加关系代词“who”引导定语从句，且句尾“wear T-shirts with”不完整，应去掉“with”。

× When I was little, I always wear T-shirts.

✓ When I was little, I always wore T-shirts.

描述过去习惯动作时，谓语动词应使用过去时态，“wear”应改为“wore”。

× Wearing T-shirts felt some more comfortable and cozy.

✓ Wearing T-shirts felt somewhat more comfortable and cozy.

“some more”用法不当，应改为“somewhat more”表示“有点更……”，使表达更准确自然。