T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并使用更准确的词汇表达。例如，“I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable and come in various styles, including plain and cool designs. They are perfect for casual outings.”

例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable and come in various styles, including plain and cool designs. They are perfect for casual outings.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不准确的问题，建议使用正确的句子结构和词汇，避免重复和错误。例如，“Yes, I often buy two T-shirts online because there are many styles to choose from, and the prices are usually cheaper than in stores.”

例: Yes, I often buy two T-shirts online because there are many styles to choose from, and the prices are usually cheaper than in stores.

提案: 回答中表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法正确。例如，“Not really. Most older people usually wear formal clothes on special occasions, but some prefer pull-over T-shirts, which look good. It depends on personal style.”

例: Not really. Most older people usually wear formal clothes on special occasions, but some prefer pull-over T-shirts, which look good. It depends on personal style.

提案: 回答中有明显的语法错误和词汇使用错误，建议使用正确的时态和词汇，表达更清晰。例如，“Yes, I wore T-shirts almost every day when I was a kid. My parents often bought me cartoon T-shirts because I loved my favorite characters at that age.”

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts almost every day when I was a kid. My parents often bought me cartoon T-shirts because I loved my favorite characters at that age.

× When I wear T-shirts for almost every day, it's comfortable and easy to put up with others and I have different type of T-shirts, some pain and some with cool designs.

✓ I wear T-shirts almost every day. They're comfortable and easy to get along with others. I have different types of T-shirts, some plain and some with cool designs.

这里“different type”应为复数形式“different types”，因为表示多种类型。还有“some pain”应为“some plain”，拼写错误。句子结构也需要调整以符合英语表达习惯。

× They are perfect for can you outgoings.

✓ They are perfect for your outings.

“can you outgoings”是错误表达，应为“your outings”，表示“你的外出活动”。这里介词使用错误，且词语拼写错误。

× Yes, I often buy 2 shirts.

✓ Yes, I often buy 2 shirts.

数字后面应使用复数形式“shirts”，原句正确，无需修改。

× I buy them mostly from online because I can search more different types of T-shirts on the Internet and also the some quality teachers are in Internet are much cheaper.

✓ I mostly buy them online because I can find more different types of T-shirts on the Internet, and some good quality T-shirts on the Internet are much cheaper.

“from online”应改为“online”，表示在网上购买。句中“teachers”应为“T-shirts”，拼写错误。句子结构混乱，需要调整。

× Not really, I think for most older people they are used to wearing formal clothes in most occasionally, but some of them do pull over T-shirts.

✓ Not really. I think most older people are used to wearing formal clothes on most occasions, but some of them do wear pull-over T-shirts.

“in most occasionally”应为“on most occasions”，介词和词语使用错误。“do pull over T-shirts”缺少动词，应为“do wear pull-over T-shirts”。

× Looks very good.

✓ They look very good.

句子缺少主语，应补充主语“they”，使句子完整。

× Yes, I wear tissues.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts.

“wear tissues”是错误表达，应为“wore T-shirts”，且时态应为过去式。

× When I was a kid, I want to wear it for almost every day, and my parents loved buying cartoon T-shirts for me because at my age, it's my favorite character.

✓ When I was a kid, I wanted to wear them almost every day, and my parents loved buying cartoon T-shirts for me because at that age, they were my favorite characters.

“want”应为过去式“wanted”，时态错误。“it”应为复数“them”，指代T-shirts。最后“it's my favorite character”应改为“they were my favorite characters”，保持时态和数的一致。