T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些冗长且表达不够自然，建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，并且注意语法和连贯性。可以先直接回答问题，然后用一两句具体说明原因。

例: I rarely wear T-shirts because I find them uncomfortable in hot weather. Instead, I prefer sleeveless tops like tank tops during summer.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并且避免重复。可以先直接回答是否经常购买，然后说明原因。

例: I don't buy T-shirts often because I rarely wear them. However, I recently bought some to use as comfortable pajamas.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达略显笨拙，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且注意词汇的准确性，如用comfortable代替comfortableness。

例: In China, older people usually don't consider T-shirts fashionable. They prefer wearing them for comfort and convenience rather than style, so they rarely wear them on formal occasions.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但句子结构可以更简洁，注意名词复数形式和冠词的使用，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I didn't wear T-shirts as a child. My mom often bought me chic clothes like dresses, skirts, and blouses because she liked to dress me like a little princess.

× I seldom wear T-shirts since they have sleeves right, but in summer the weather just so hot so I get sweaty easily.

✓ I seldom wear T-shirts since they have sleeves, right? But in summer, the weather is just so hot that I get sweaty easily.

原句中缺少连词和适当的句子结构，导致表达不清晰。应使用连词连接句子，并补充缺失的动词形式，使句子完整。

× So I normally wear sleeveless tops like tank tops unless it's like a formal occasion and I want to look.

✓ So I normally wear sleeveless tops like tank tops unless it's a formal occasion and I want to look nice.

句子末尾缺少形容词来完成表达，'look'后应接形容词如'nice'，否则句子不完整。

× I really buy T-shirts since I don't wear them too often, but I did buy some T-shirts a few weeks before be because I want to wear them as pajamas so I bought them.

✓ I don't really buy T-shirts since I don't wear them too often, but I did buy some T-shirts a few weeks ago because I wanted to wear them as pajamas, so I bought them.

原句中'modal verb'使用不当，'really buy'应为'don't really buy'表示否定；时间表达错误，'a few weeks before be'应为'a few weeks ago'；时态不一致，后半句应使用过去时。

× I think the older people in China may not see T-shirts as a fashionable choice because T-shirts are mostly for comfortableness and for convenience, so in normal occasion they don't usually wear them.

✓ I think older people in China may not see T-shirts as a fashionable choice because T-shirts are mostly for comfort and convenience, so on normal occasions they don't usually wear them.

'comfortableness'用词不当，应使用不可数名词'comfort'；'in normal occasion'应为复数形式'on normal occasions'，并且介词使用错误。

× No, I didn't because when I was a kid my mom used to buy me a lot of chic clothing like dress and skirts and blouses because she liked to dress me as a little Princess.

✓ No, I didn't because when I was a kid my mom used to buy me a lot of chic clothing like dresses, skirts, and blouses because she liked to dress me as a little princess.

'dress'应为复数形式'dresses'，以匹配列举的其他复数名词；'Princess'不需要大写，除非指特定称号。