T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas and using linking words to make your response smoother and more natural.

例: I wear T-shirts quite often because I prefer casual clothes; they are comfortable, convenient, and affordable, which makes them my favorite choice.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and correct sentence structures to improve clarity.

例: Yes, I buy T-shirts most often because I have many of them, and I find them more comfortable than regular shirts.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some awkward phrasing. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and be more specific in your description.

例: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country because many of them wear T-shirts in various colors and patterns, which makes this clothing suitable for all age groups.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same information. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts as a kid because they are very popular and easy to buy in my country. My mom often bought me T-shirts and jeans, so I wore them frequently during my childhood.

× So I like T-shirt a lot.

✓ So I like T-shirts a lot.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the sentence refers to T-shirts in general, not just one.

× Yes, the clothing piece that I buy the most is probably the T-shirts.

✓ Yes, the clothing pieces that I buy the most are probably T-shirts.

'Clothing piece' should be plural 'clothing pieces' to match 'T-shirts' which is plural. Also, the verb should be 'are' to agree with the plural subject.

× I like to be at T-shirts the most because they are more comfortable than the shirts.

✓ I like T-shirts the most because they are more comfortable than shirts.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here and should be removed. Also, 'the shirts' should be 'shirts' to generalize the comparison.

× T-shirts are quite fashionable for older people in my country because I see a lot of people around me who are of old age wearing T-shirts and T-shirts to come in various colors and patterns so it suits the every age group.

✓ T-shirts are quite fashionable for older people in my country because I see a lot of people around me who are old wearing T-shirts. T-shirts come in various colors and patterns, so they suit every age group.

The sentence was run-on and confusing. 'Who are of old age' is better as 'who are old'. The phrase 'T-shirts to come' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts come'. 'It suits the every age group' should be 'they suit every age group' to agree with plural subject and correct article usage.

× T-shirts are one of the most famous piece of clothing in my country and it is very easy to buy AT shirt.

✓ T-shirts are one of the most famous pieces of clothing in my country and it is very easy to buy a T-shirt.

'Piece' should be plural 'pieces' because 'one of the most famous' refers to multiple pieces. 'AT shirt' is a typo and should be 'a T-shirt'.

× so I usually worn T-shirts during my childhood.

✓ so I usually wore T-shirts during my childhood.

'Worn' is the past participle and requires an auxiliary verb. The correct simple past tense is 'wore' here because 'usually' indicates habitual past action.