T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some redundancy. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid confusing phrases like 'comfortable in silver suit'.

例: I usually wear T-shirts once or twice a month. For example, I prefer T-shirts when I want to feel relaxed at home or during casual outings.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, specify what kind of T-shirts you buy and why.

例: Yes, I buy T-shirts once or twice a month. I usually choose good quality ones because I like to wear them often. Moreover, I sometimes buy T-shirts as gifts for my friends and family.

提案: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: T-shirts have become quite fashionable among older people in my country. This is because, in the past, they rarely wore T-shirts, so now they enjoy trying this modern style.

提案: Your answer is understandable but can be more concise and natural. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid, and I still wear them now. I find T-shirts very comfortable, especially when I want to relax in casual clothes.

× I wear T-shirt when I feel comfortable in silver suit and I wear T-shirts once or twice a month to get comfortable.

✓ I wear T-shirts when I feel comfortable in a silver suit and I wear T-shirts once or twice a month to get comfortable.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because it refers to T-shirts in general. Also, 'silver suit' needs an article 'a' before it as it is a singular countable noun.

× Yes, I buy T-shirts once or twice a month and I purchase good ones and I really like to buy T-shirts for me and for other ones as a gift.

✓ Yes, I buy T-shirts once or twice a month and I purchase good ones and I really like to buy T-shirts for myself and for others as gifts.

The phrase 'for me' should be 'for myself' to correctly use the reflexive pronoun. 'Other ones' is incorrect; it should be 'others' to refer to other people. Also, 'as a gift' should be plural 'as gifts' because multiple T-shirts are bought as gifts.

× T-shirts are very fashionable for older peoples because they think that T-shirts are only fashionable for them because in past past they didn't wear any T-shirt.

✓ T-shirts are very fashionable for older people because they think that T-shirts are only fashionable for them because in the past they didn't wear any T-shirts.

The word 'peoples' is incorrect; the correct plural form is 'people'. 'Past past' is a repetition and should be 'the past'. 'Any T-shirt' should be plural 'any T-shirts' to match the context.

× Yes, honestly speaking, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid and now also I wear T-shirts because uh, whenever I feel uncomfortable in casual clothes, I wear T-shirts for feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, honestly speaking, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid and now I also wear T-shirts because whenever I feel uncomfortable in casual clothes, I wear T-shirts to feel comfortable.

The phrase 'for feel comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'to feel comfortable' to express purpose. Also, 'now also I wear' is better as 'now I also wear' for correct word order.