T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question first, then add specific details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

例: I often wear T-shirts, especially those in light colors like white and light yellow, because they keep me cool and comfortable during the day.

提案: Your answer is brief and could be improved by adding more specific reasons and linking words. Also, try to use more natural phrasing and avoid awkward expressions.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts rather than shirts because they are more comfortable and suitable for casual occasions.

提案: Your answer lacks detail and has grammatical errors. Try to provide more specific information and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, use correct plural forms and article usage.

例: In my country, older people often wear white T-shirts because they believe light colors suit them better and look neat.

提案: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Avoid irrelevant information and focus on answering clearly. Also, pay attention to verb tenses and sentence structure.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts often when I was a kid because they were comfortable and easy to move around in.

× I usually prefer wearing T-shirts of light colors because I love wearing white light yellow.

✓ I usually prefer wearing T-shirts of light colors because I love wearing white and light yellow.

The phrase 'white light yellow' is unclear and seems to be missing a conjunction. Adding 'and' clarifies that the student likes both white and light yellow colors.

× I buy mostly T-shirts instead of shirts because it's comfortable for wearing.

✓ I mostly buy T-shirts instead of shirts because they are comfortable to wear.

The adverb 'mostly' should be placed before the verb 'buy' for correct word order. Also, 'comfortable for wearing' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'comfortable to wear.' Additionally, 'they are' agrees with the plural noun 'T-shirts.'

× In my country, old people usually wear a white color T-shirts because they think it is suitable for them.

✓ In my country, old people usually wear white-colored T-shirts because they think they are suitable for them.

The phrase 'a white color T-shirts' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun 'T-shirts.' Removing 'a' and using 'white-colored' as an adjective fixes the issue. Also, 'they think it is suitable' should be 'they think they are suitable' to agree with plural 'T-shirts.'

× When I was scared I usually wear T-shirts because it is very comfortable for the kids skin.

✓ When I was scared, I usually wore T-shirts because they were very comfortable for kids' skin.

The sentence refers to past events, so 'wear' should be in past tense 'wore.' Also, 'it is' should be 'they were' to agree with plural 'T-shirts.' The phrase 'the kids skin' should be 'kids' skin' to show possession.