T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating the word 'T-shirt' too often. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable. Moreover, I prefer them when I travel long distances since they keep me relaxed.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating the same phrase. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts when I go to the mall with my mother because I really like them and enjoy adding new styles to my collection.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use correct verb forms, and provide specific examples. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and use linking words to connect your points.

例: Older people in my country usually do not wear T-shirts because they prefer traditional clothing like kurtas, pyjamas, and salwar suits. However, in urban areas, some older people do wear T-shirts occasionally.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Use past tense consistently when talking about the past. Also, clarify your ideas and avoid unclear phrases like 'wear frogs'.

例: Yes, I sometimes wore T-shirts when I was a kid, but my mother often told me stories about how I mostly wore overalls.

× Most of the time I wear T-shirt because I feel T-shirt is a very comfortable clothes.

✓ Most of the time I wear T-shirts because I feel T-shirts are very comfortable clothes.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'most of the time' implying multiple occasions. Also, 'clothes' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. This corrects the singular/plural agreement.

× Also whenever I want to go some outside place which is very long to travel then I wear T-shirt.

✓ Also, whenever I want to go to some outside place which is far to travel, I wear a T-shirt.

The preposition 'to' is needed after 'go' to indicate direction. 'Some outside place' is awkward; 'some place outside' or 'an outside place' is better. 'Very long to travel' is better expressed as 'far to travel'. Also, 'a T-shirt' is needed for singular countable noun.

× Yes, I often buy T-shirts whenever I visit to the mall with my mother.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts whenever I visit the mall with my mother.

The preposition 'to' after 'visit' is unnecessary and incorrect here. 'Visit' is a transitive verb and does not require 'to' before the object.

× I wanted to purchase T-shirt all the time because I love T-shirts.

✓ I want to purchase T-shirts all the time because I love T-shirts.

The sentence is about a habitual action in the present, so present tense 'want' is appropriate instead of past tense 'wanted'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'all the time'.

× As older people in my country didn't wear as much teachers because in my country there is many religious clothes such as kurta, pyjama ferments and salwar suit for women's.

✓ Older people in my country don't wear many T-shirts because there are many religious clothes such as kurta, pyjama, and salwar suits for women.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'didn't wear as much teachers' is incorrect; it should be 'don't wear many T-shirts'. 'There is many' should be 'there are many' to agree with plural 'clothes'. 'Pyjama ferments' is likely a typo and corrected to 'pyjama'. 'Salwar suit for women's' should be 'salwar suits for women' to correct plural and possessive errors.

× So they wear that clothes all the time.

✓ So they wear those clothes all the time.

'Clothes' is plural, so the demonstrative pronoun should be 'those' instead of 'that'.

× Sometime in urban cities some.

✓ Sometimes, in urban cities, some people wear T-shirts.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'people wear T-shirts' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× Yes, sometimes I wear T-shirt when I was kid, but the most of the time my mother tells me the story of mine that most of the time I wear frogs.

✓ Yes, sometimes I wore T-shirts when I was a kid, but most of the time my mother tells me the story that I wore frocks.

The verb 'wear' should be in past tense 'wore' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to indicate multiple occasions. 'The most of the time' should be 'most of the time'. 'Story of mine' is awkward; 'story that' is better. 'Frogs' is likely a typo for 'frocks', a type of clothing.