T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some errors, such as saying "dessert" instead of "T-shirt." Try to be more precise and avoid repetition. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually wear T-shirts at home because they are comfortable and suitable for the hot and humid climate where I live. Therefore, wearing T-shirts helps me stay cool and relaxed.

提案: Your answer has some good points but contains unclear words like "desserts" and "wedding shorts." Try to use correct vocabulary and avoid filler words like "uh." Also, organize your answer with clear linking words to show the contrast between past and present habits.

例: Yes, I used to buy T-shirts very often when I was 15 or 16 years old. However, now I buy them less frequently because I prefer wearing formal clothes to look more professional.

提案: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and incomplete at the end. Try to avoid repeating words and finish your sentences clearly. Use linking words to explain reasons and preferences more logically.

例: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country. They usually prefer simple and plain T-shirts rather than colorful ones or those with prints because they find them more comfortable and affordable.

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has many filler words and some unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and clearly, avoid fillers, and organize your ideas with linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts a lot when I was a kid because they were affordable and fashionable. Whenever a new brand appeared, I was eager to buy their T-shirts and wore them regularly.

× I think I prefer wearing dessert whenever I am at home because it is very comfortable to wear and considering the climate of the area that I live in, it is very hot and humid.

✓ I think I prefer wearing T-shirts whenever I am at home because they are very comfortable to wear and considering the climate of the area that I live in, it is very hot and humid.

The word 'dessert' is incorrect here; the student likely meant 'T-shirts'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar error, but it affects sentence clarity. Replace 'dessert' with 'T-shirts' to correct the meaning.

× So it is very advisable as well as it is very preferable to just wear T-shirt because it doesn't it doesn't feel you very warm so it is very.

✓ So it is very advisable as well as preferable to just wear T-shirts because they don't make you feel very warm.

The phrase 'it doesn't it doesn't feel you very warm' is grammatically incorrect and awkward. The correct expression is 'they don't make you feel very warm' because T-shirts are plural and 'make' is the correct verb here. Also, 'preferable' does not need 'very' before it in this context.

× Yes, very often. So I used to buy a lot of desserts back then whenever I was like 15 or 16 year old.

✓ Yes, very often. So I used to buy a lot of T-shirts back then whenever I was like 15 or 16 years old.

Again, 'desserts' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts'. Also, '16 year old' should be '16 years old' to correctly express age.

× But now not so often because I love, uh, wedding shorts more than T-shirts, because I love, uh, looking professional nowadays.

✓ But now not so often because I love wearing shorts more than T-shirts, because I love looking professional nowadays.

The phrase 'wedding shorts' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing shorts'. This is a vocabulary and word choice error affecting clarity.

× I think they are very fashionable. Old people can afford it too and they're very, quite fashionable.

✓ I think they are very fashionable. Old people can afford them too and they're quite fashionable.

'It' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'T-shirts'. Also, 'very, quite fashionable' is redundant; 'quite fashionable' suffices.

× They love to wear it and I think not not that of kind like not of different color or maybe something that is written into the T-shirt.

✓ They love to wear them and I think not that kind, like not of different colors or maybe something that is written on the T-shirt.

'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. 'Not not that of kind' is incorrect; it should be 'not that kind'. Also, 'written into' should be 'written on'.

× If the T-shirt is very simple, plain and it is very affordable, then they tend to basically buy the.

✓ If the T-shirt is very simple, plain, and very affordable, then they tend to basically buy it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'buy the.' It should be 'buy it' to complete the thought. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in the list.

× It's mostly I used to like buy the T-shirt all the time because it was quite affordable and it was very nice and it was very fashionable uh, to wear this as uh, whenever the uh, fashion came or whenever the new brand came, then I was very eager to uh buy them and I used to love T-shirts and wear them all the time.

✓ Mostly, I used to like buying T-shirts all the time because they were quite affordable, very nice, and very fashionable to wear. Whenever a new fashion or brand came, I was very eager to buy them, and I used to love T-shirts and wear them all the time.

'It's mostly I used to like buy the T-shirt' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'Mostly, I used to like buying T-shirts.' Also, 'the T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match context. Verb forms and sentence structure are corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Maybe I was wearing them.

✓ Maybe I wore them.

'Was wearing' is past continuous, which suggests an ongoing action, but here simple past 'wore' is more appropriate to indicate habitual past action.