T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and concise.

例: I usually wear T-shirts every day when I get home because they are comfortable. I like T-shirts with bright colours and interesting graphics because they make me feel happy and lively.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains incomplete sentences. Focus on answering the question directly, use correct grammar, and avoid introducing unrelated topics unless clearly linked. Use linking words to organise your ideas and provide specific reasons.

例: I buy T-shirts occasionally because I value quality over quantity. I usually choose genuine T-shirts since they last longer and are more comfortable to wear.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, check for minor errors like 'true shirts' instead of 'T-shirts'.

例: I think fashion in T-shirts is not limited by age or gender. Many older people, especially in big cities, enjoy wearing fashionable T-shirts because it allows them to express their creativity and open-mindedness.

提案: Your answer is somewhat disorganised and contains hesitations. Try to speak more fluently and organise your response with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts a lot when I was a child, especially during the summer. My siblings and I often went shopping with our parents to buy colourful T-shirts because they were comfortable in the hot weather.

× I prefer to wear T-shirt.

✓ I prefer to wear T-shirts.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural here because the speaker is talking about wearing T-shirts in general, not just one single T-shirt. Using the plural form is appropriate when referring to a category or multiple items.

× I prefer to have different kinds of T-shirts, especially they have lots of graphics and colorful because it produce a joyful atmosphere.

✓ I prefer to have different kinds of T-shirts, especially those that have lots of graphics and are colorful because they produce a joyful atmosphere.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they have' without a clear subject and 'it produce' which should agree in number with the subject. 'Those that have' correctly refers to the T-shirts, and 'they produce' agrees with the plural subject 'T-shirts'. Also, 'colorful' needs a verb 'are' to link it properly.

× I prefer to wear T-shirt with bright colors.

✓ I prefer to wear T-shirts with bright colors.

Again, 'T-shirt' should be plural because the speaker is referring to wearing T-shirts in general, not just one. Also, 'with bright colors' correctly describes the T-shirts.

× It's producer, lively atmosphere and it's changed my mood.

✓ They produce a lively atmosphere and they change my mood.

'It's producer' is incorrect; the subject should be plural 'they' referring to T-shirts. 'Producer' is a noun, but the verb 'produce' is needed here. Also, 'it's changed' should be 'they change' to agree with the plural subject and present tense.

× I prefer to buy T-shirt from time to time.

✓ I prefer to buy T-shirts from time to time.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural because the speaker is talking about buying T-shirts in general, not just one.

× I prefer quality to two quantities, so I prefer to buy genuine T-shirt because they don't worn out easily, I can use them.

✓ I prefer quality to quantity, so I prefer to buy genuine T-shirts because they don't wear out easily and I can use them.

The phrase 'two quantities' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'quality to quantity'. 'T-shirt' should be plural as the speaker refers to multiple items. 'Don't worn out' is incorrect; the correct form is 'don't wear out' because 'wear' is the base verb after 'don't'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split or connected properly.

× There's a bad attitude towards women wearing T-shirt on the streets, so we have to wear it at home and it's not really fair.

✓ There is a bad attitude towards women wearing T-shirts on the streets, so we have to wear them at home and it's not really fair.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' and is correct for singular, but 'attitude' is singular so 'there is' is fine. However, 'T-shirt' should be plural as it refers to T-shirts in general. Also, 'wear it' should be 'wear them' to agree with the plural 'T-shirts'.

× I believe that wearing fashionable T-shirts has nothing to do with the age and gender.

✓ I believe that wearing fashionable T-shirts has nothing to do with age and gender.

The phrase 'the age' is incorrect here; 'age' is an uncountable noun in this context and does not need 'the'.

× And most old people, especially in big cities and modern areas prefer to wear fashionable true shirts.

✓ And most old people, especially in big cities and modern areas, prefer to wear fashionable T-shirts.

'True shirts' is a typo or mishearing; it should be 'T-shirts'. Also, a comma is needed after 'areas' for clarity.

× And I like them because they can show their creativity and they are really open minded so.

✓ I like them because they can show their creativity and they are really open-minded.

The sentence ends with 'so' which is incomplete and creates a sentence fragment. Removing 'so' completes the sentence properly. Also, 'open minded' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded' when used as an adjective.

× I recall a lot of my memory when I was a child.

✓ I recall a lot of memories from when I was a child.

'A lot of my memory' is incorrect; 'memory' is uncountable or singular, but here the plural 'memories' is appropriate. Also, 'from when I was a child' is a clearer expression.

× I used to wear T-shirt at home.

✓ I used to wear T-shirts at home.

'T-shirt' should be plural because the speaker is referring to wearing T-shirts in general during childhood.

× My, uh, siblings and I, uh, went to a shop with our parents and bought a lot of T-shirts, especially in summers, uh, we would wear AT shirt because the weather was really warm and also hot and.

✓ My siblings and I went to a shop with our parents and bought a lot of T-shirts, especially in summer. We would wear T-shirts because the weather was really warm and hot.

The sentence is a run-on and contains filler words 'uh' which should be removed for clarity. 'Summers' should be singular 'summer' when referring to the season generally. 'AT shirt' is a typo and should be 'T-shirt'. The sentence ending with 'and' is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.