T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to form a clear topic sentence and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about occasions when you wear T-shirts.

例: I wear T-shirts quite often because they are my go-to comfortable clothes. For example, I usually wear them at home and also when I meet my friends. Moreover, T-shirts come in various styles suitable for different occasions, which makes them very versatile.

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details with linking words. Avoid vague phrases and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are essential in my wardrobe. Although I don't buy clothes frequently, T-shirts make up the largest part of my collection. In fact, I have more than 20 T-shirts suitable for different occasions and styles.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains repetition and grammatical mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to explain the preferences of older people with specific examples.

例: T-shirts are not very fashionable among older people in my country. Instead, they prefer wearing long-sleeved or coloured shirts and polo shirts. However, some older people still wear T-shirts at home for comfort.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has many errors. Make sure to answer directly, avoid unclear phrases, and provide specific supporting details with proper linking words.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. They were often handed down from my aunties or elder sister. Also, T-shirts were common and affordable, so I had many of them.

× I I wear T-shirt regularly is my go to comfortable dress for a day and I pretty much wear it when I am inside the house or when I even go out to meet friends and the different varieties base and suitable for every occasions.

✓ I wear T-shirts regularly; they are my go-to comfortable dress for the day, and I pretty much wear them when I am inside the house or when I go out to meet friends. There are different varieties based and suitable for every occasion.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to them generally. Also, 'occasions' should be singular 'occasion' after 'every' because 'every' is followed by a singular noun. Using correct singular and plural forms improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, if it's among the clothes. These are just one of the most common thing that I usually buy, but I'm not a regular buyer of clothes.

✓ Yes, if it's among the clothes. These are just some of the most common things that I usually buy, but I'm not a regular buyer of clothes.

The phrase 'one of the most common thing' is incorrect because 'one of the' should be followed by a plural noun. Changing 'thing' to 'things' and 'just one' to 'just some' corrects the singular/plural mismatch.

× But comparatively, it's still the highest number have put so far and I have more than 20 T-shirts fit for different occasions and styles.

✓ But comparatively, it's still the highest number I have bought so far, and I have more than 20 T-shirts fit for different occasions and styles.

The phrase 'highest number have put' is unclear and likely a misuse. Correcting it to 'highest number I have bought' clarifies the meaning and maintains proper subject-verb agreement.

× T-shirt, it's not as prevalent as among the new generations.

✓ T-shirts are not as prevalent among the new generations.

The singular 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. Also, 'as among' is incorrect; 'as prevalent among' is the correct phrase.

× The older generation prefer to what to to wear the sleeves or the color shirts or the polo shirts.

✓ The older generation prefers to wear long-sleeved or colored shirts or polo shirts.

'Older generation' is singular and requires singular verb 'prefers'. Also, 'what to to wear the sleeves or the color shirts' is unclear and corrected to 'wear long-sleeved or colored shirts' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes of course I would teach it when I was a kid and it was handed over for my aunties or my elder sister and it was also the most common and the IT was mostly available or it was cheaper.

✓ Yes, of course I would wear it when I was a kid, and it was handed down from my aunties or my elder sister. It was also the most common, and it was mostly available or cheaper.

The verb 'teach' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'wear'. Also, 'handed over for' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'handed down from'. Correcting these verbs to past tense and appropriate usage improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.