T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'way wear AT shirt'는 의미 전달이 어렵고, 문장이 중복되어 비효율적입니다. 좀 더 명확하고 간결하게 자신의 의견과 구체적인 예시를 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I wear T-shirts every day because they are comfortable. I have various types, such as Hawaiian and sports T-shirts, which I like to wear depending on the occasion.

提案: 과거 시제와 현재 시제가 혼용되어 있고, 문장이 명확하지 않습니다. 또한, 문장 연결이 부자연스럽고 내용이 불분명합니다. 문법을 정확히 사용하고, 문장을 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I sometimes buy T-shirts. I usually purchase them at department stores. Also, my cousin runs a shop where I occasionally buy T-shirts.

提案: 답변이 모호하고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 자신의 의견을 명확히 표현하고, 이유나 예시를 들어 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 또한, 문장 연결어를 사용해 논리적인 흐름을 만들어야 합니다.

例: T-shirts are somewhat fashionable for older people in my country. However, they are usually considered casual wear rather than stylish clothing. For example, older people prefer shirts or jackets for formal occasions.

提案: 문장이 길고 문법 오류가 많아 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 과거 시제를 일관되게 사용하고, 문장을 간결하게 나누어 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, I always wore T-shirts when I was a kid. I liked Hawaiian and sports T-shirts because I played soccer every day.

× Actually I way wear AT shirt every day.

✓ Actually I wear a T-shirt every day.

The sentence has a singular and plural issue. 'AT shirt' should be 'a T-shirt' because it refers to one shirt. Also, 'way' is a typo and should be 'wear'. The article 'a' is needed before the singular noun 'T-shirt'.

× I have more variety of T-shirts like Hawaiian T-shirts, sports T-shirts and so on.

✓ I have a variety of T-shirts like Hawaiian T-shirts, sports T-shirts and so on.

The phrase 'more variety' is incorrect here. The correct expression is 'a variety of' when referring to different kinds of something. 'More variety' is not used in this context.

× Yes, I sometimes bought a T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I sometimes buy T-shirts.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'Sometimes' indicates habitual action, so present tense 'buy' is appropriate. Also, 'a T-shirts' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts' without 'a' because 'T-shirts' is plural.

× Yes, I sometimes bought a T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I sometimes buy T-shirts.

The phrase 'a T-shirts' is incorrect because 'a' is singular and 'T-shirts' is plural. Remove 'a' to correct the plural form.

× Uh, I bought T-shirts in the department store and my cousins closed doors.

✓ Uh, I bought T-shirts in the department store, but my cousins' store was closed.

The original sentence is unclear and structurally incorrect. 'My cousins closed doors' is not proper English. It should be 'my cousins' store was closed' to convey the intended meaning.

× My cousin operate.

✓ My cousin operates the store.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks proper verb conjugation. 'Operate' should be 'operates' to agree with the singular subject 'my cousin'. Also, the object 'the store' clarifies the meaning.

× Oh a little bit.

✓ Oh, a little bit.

Missing comma after 'Oh' for correct punctuation, though this is minor and not a grammar problem from the list.

× All the people can wear a T-shirt for the their fashionable style but T-shirt is not good for the fashion.

✓ All people can wear T-shirts for their fashionable style, but T-shirts are not good for fashion.

'The their' is incorrect; only 'their' is needed. Also, 'a T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to match 'all people'. 'T-shirt is' should be 'T-shirts are' for plural subject-verb agreement.

× I think why such is the best?

✓ I think that is the best.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'I think that is the best' is a correct and clear sentence.

× Yes, of course I always wear T-shirts in my kid I like Hawaiian T-shirts and how I like sports T-shirts because I always play soccer every day so I.

✓ Yes, of course I always wore T-shirts when I was a kid. I liked Hawaiian T-shirts and also liked sports T-shirts because I played soccer every day.

The sentence incorrectly uses present tense 'wear' and 'like' when referring to past time 'when I was a kid'. Past tense verbs 'wore', 'liked', and 'played' are appropriate. The sentence is also fragmented and needs restructuring for clarity.