T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding filler words like "like" and repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details.

例: I wear T-shirts every day, especially when I go to work or college, because they are more comfortable than fancy tops.

提案: Avoid repeating filler words such as "like" and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and be more specific about your buying habits.

例: Yes, I usually buy T-shirts two or three times a month. Mostly, I shop on weekends at the mall or grocery stores like Costco, and I buy T-shirts when I find them at a good price.

提案: Work on sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to organize your answer and provide specific cultural details to enrich your response.

例: In my country, older people usually do not wear fashionable or regular T-shirts. Instead, they prefer traditional clothing like kurta pajamas, pants, and shirts.

提案: Avoid hesitation sounds like "uh" and unclear phrases. Make your answer more coherent by clearly stating your habits and including relevant details. Also, correct grammar mistakes and avoid confusing words.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts sometimes as a child, but I mostly wore skirts and frocks. My mom often told me that I always wanted to wear frocks.

× I wear T-shirts every day when like when I'm going to work or when I'm going to college, I prefer to wear T-shirts because it's more comfortable than any fancy tops.

✓ I wear T-shirts every day, like when I'm going to work or when I'm going to college. I prefer to wear T-shirts because they're more comfortable than any fancy tops.

The original sentence has a run-on structure and awkward phrasing with repeated 'when like when'. Breaking it into two sentences improves clarity. Also, 'it's' should be 'they're' to agree with the plural noun 'T-shirts'.

× Yes, I buy T-shirt twice or thrice in a month, like whenever I have a free day.

✓ Yes, I buy T-shirts twice or thrice a month, like whenever I have a free day.

The noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the speaker buys more than one. Also, 'in a month' is better expressed as 'a month'.

× Then if I see the T-shirts is in a good price so then I buy it.

✓ Then if I see the T-shirts are at a good price, I buy them.

The subject 'T-shirts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'in a good price' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'at a good price'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'T-shirts'.

× Well, in my country older people don't wear the fashionable T-shirts or any regular T-shirts because in my country people prefer to wear kurta piyamas and pant and shirts the and so on.

✓ Well, in my country older people don't wear fashionable T-shirts or any regular T-shirts because people prefer to wear kurta piyamas, pants, shirts, and so on.

'Pant' should be plural 'pants' to match the list of clothing items. Also, 'the fashionable T-shirts' is better as 'fashionable T-shirts' without 'the' for general statements. The phrase 'the and so on' is incorrect and should be 'and so on'.

× Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was scared, but one thing that I remember, uh, when I was a child, I most likely to wear, uh, skirts and frocks.

✓ Yes, I used to wear T-shirts when I was scared, but one thing I remember is that when I was a child, I was most likely to wear skirts and frocks.

The phrase 'I most likely to wear' is incorrect; it should be 'I was most likely to wear' to use the past tense verb 'was' with the adverb 'most likely'. Also, 'one thing that I remember' needs a verb to complete the sentence, so 'is that' is added.

× My mom used to say me that you always want to wear frogs and so that you'll.

✓ My mom used to tell me that I always wanted to wear frocks and so on.

The verb 'say' is incorrectly used with 'me'; it should be 'tell me'. Also, 'frogs' is a misspelling of 'frocks'. The phrase 'and so that you'll' is incomplete and unclear; 'and so on' is appropriate here. The pronoun 'you' should be 'I' to reflect the speaker's perspective.