T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep sentences natural.

例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable and versatile. For example, I can wear them casually or even smartly with the right accessories. That's why I love wearing T-shirts and often buy new ones.

提案: Your answer needs better structure and clearer expression. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating the same points. Also, be careful with tense and sentence formation.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because they are very comfortable. For instance, I recently bought a Nike T-shirt which is my favorite. I plan to buy more in the near future because I like their style and comfort.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid grammatical mistakes and redundancy.

例: T-shirts are moderately fashionable among older people in my country. Although not everyone wears them, many find T-shirts easy to match with other clothes. Therefore, I believe T-shirts are a good choice for people of all ages.

提案: Your answer needs clearer sentence structure and less repetition. Start with a direct answer, then add specific details with linking words. Check grammar and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

例: Yes, I wore many kinds of T-shirts when I was a kid, including brands like Nike and Puma. My father often bought them for me, so I always enjoyed wearing T-shirts during my childhood.

× Minimum everyday.

✓ At least every day.

'Minimum everyday' is incorrect because 'minimum' is a noun or adjective and 'everyday' is an adjective meaning common or normal. The correct phrase is 'at least every day' to express frequency. 'Every day' as two words means each day, which fits the context.

× I always try to wear AT shirt because I think it is it's allowing me to go anywhere else like smartly.

✓ I always try to wear a T-shirt because I think it allows me to go anywhere smartly.

'AT shirt' should be 'a T-shirt' as 'T-shirt' is countable and needs an article. 'It is it's allowing' is incorrect; 'it allows' is the correct present simple form. 'Anywhere else like smartly' is awkward; 'anywhere smartly' is clearer.

× That's why I always try to wear T-shirt and I love wear T-shirt.

✓ That's why I always try to wear T-shirts and I love wearing T-shirts.

'Wear T-shirt' is missing the gerund form 'wearing' after 'love'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally.

× I always try to buy T-shirt.

✓ I always try to buy T-shirts.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking about buying them regularly or in general.

× Yes, definitely. I buy T-shirt because I when I wear it I feel comfortable.

✓ Yes, definitely. I buy T-shirts because when I wear them I feel comfortable.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to indicate general buying. 'It' should be 'them' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'.

× That's why I always like to buy T-shirt even tomorrow.

✓ That's why I always like to buy T-shirts, even tomorrow.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general reference. Added comma for clarity.

× After tomorrow I buy a T-shirt.

✓ The day after tomorrow, I will buy a T-shirt.

'After tomorrow' is better expressed as 'the day after tomorrow'. The verb 'buy' should be in future tense 'will buy' to indicate future action.

× It's Nike brand.

✓ It's a Nike brand T-shirt.

'Nike brand' needs an article and noun to be clear. Adding 'a' and 'T-shirt' clarifies the meaning.

× It is very favorite T-shirt for me.

✓ It is my favorite T-shirt.

'Very favorite' is incorrect; 'favorite' is a superlative adjective and does not need 'very'. Also, possessive 'my' is needed.

× Not too much but quite a bit.

✓ Not too much, but quite a few.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'few' is used with countable nouns like 'people'. 'Quite a few' is the correct phrase for countable plural.

× People like to wear T-shirt in our country.

✓ People like to wear T-shirts in our country.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally.

× That's why I think every people should wear T-shirt because it always match the other outfits.

✓ That's why I think every person should wear a T-shirt because it always matches other outfits.

'Every people' is incorrect; 'every person' is correct. 'T-shirt' needs an article 'a'. 'Match' should be 'matches' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Removed 'the' before 'other outfits' as it is general.

× That's why I always try to wear and I think people should be do it.

✓ That's why I always try to wear them and I think people should do it.

Added 'them' to clarify what is being worn. 'Should be do it' is incorrect; correct form is 'should do it'.

× Yes, of course I have various kind of T-shirt like Nike, Puma and but this type T-shirt I always wear in my childhood time and my my father always bought me for for me T-shirt.

✓ Yes, of course I have various kinds of T-shirts like Nike and Puma, and I always wore this type of T-shirt in my childhood. My father always bought T-shirts for me.

'Various kind' should be 'various kinds' (plural). 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when general. 'And but' is incorrect conjunction; simplified. 'I always wear' in past context should be 'I always wore'. 'My my' is repetition. 'Bought me for for me T-shirt' is incorrect; corrected to 'bought T-shirts for me'.

× That's why in my childhood time I always like to wear T-shirt.

✓ That's why in my childhood I always liked to wear T-shirts.

'Like' should be past tense 'liked' to match 'childhood' time. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' for general reference.