T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to avoid repeating phrases like 'on the other hand' incorrectly and ensure your sentences are grammatically correct. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

例: I usually wear T-shirts almost every day during the warmer months because they are comfortable and practical. However, I rarely wear them in winter as it gets too cold.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Avoid incorrect use of 'on the other hand' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Try to make your sentences clearer and more natural by simplifying your structure.

例: I don't buy T-shirts very often because I find it hard to choose clothes that suit me. However, my wife enjoys shopping for T-shirts and sometimes buys them as gifts for me.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of experience attending' and instead explain clearly why older people prefer other clothing.

例: In my country, T-shirts are generally not seen as fashionable for older people because they usually attend formal events like ceremonies and weddings, where more elegant clothing is expected. Therefore, T-shirts are considered too casual for these occasions.

提案: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and correct phrases like 'simply affordable' to 'simply affordable'.

例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child, especially during summer. My mother liked buying them because they were affordable and easy to wash, and I enjoyed wearing them since they were comfortable in hot weather.

× On the other hand, I really wear the items because it is too cold.

✓ On the other hand, I rarely wear the items because it is too cold.

The original sentence uses 'really' incorrectly to express frequency. The intended meaning is likely 'rarely', which correctly indicates infrequent action in the present tense.

× On the other hand, on my wife loves to find and explore cool and comfortable T-shirts that she sometimes buys it and gives me as a gift.

✓ On the other hand, my wife loves to find and explore cool and comfortable T-shirts that she sometimes buys and gives me as a gift.

The phrase 'on my wife' is incorrect; it should be 'my wife'. Also, the pronoun 'it' is unnecessary after 'buys' because the object 'T-shirts' is already mentioned.

× That is because they have a lot of experience attending on special occasions such as ceremonies, anniversaries or wedding events.

✓ That is because they have a lot of experience attending special occasions such as ceremonies, anniversaries or wedding events.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect after 'attending'. The verb 'attend' is directly followed by the object without a preposition.

× My mother loved to buy them because they simply affordable and easy to wash, and I also loved wearing them because they were comfortable to wear, especially in hot days.

✓ My mother loved to buy them because they were simply affordable and easy to wash, and I also loved wearing them because they were comfortable to wear, especially on hot days.

The adjective 'affordable' requires the verb 'were' to form the correct past tense predicate. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to 'hot days'.