T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로도 부정확합니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 문장을 완성하여 자연스럽게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I usually wear T-shirts three days a week.'처럼 구체적이고 완전한 문장으로 답변하세요.

例: I usually wear T-shirts three days a week because they are comfortable and suitable for casual occasions.

提案: 답변이 불완전하고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 대한 명확한 답변과 함께 이유나 빈도를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I sometimes buy T-shirts, about 10 a year, because I like to have different styles.'처럼 말하세요.

例: I sometimes buy T-shirts, about 10 a year, because I like to have different styles for various occasions.

提案: 답변이 너무 짧고 의미가 불분명합니다. 질문에 대해 자신의 의견을 명확히 표현하고, 이유나 예시를 덧붙여 답변을 확장하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I think T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people because they prefer comfortable and casual clothes.'처럼 말하세요.

例: I think T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people because they prefer comfortable and casual clothes that are easy to wear.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 틀리고 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 과거 시제를 사용하여 명확하게 답변하고, 간단한 이유나 기억을 덧붙이는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'Yes, I did. I often wore T-shirts because they were comfortable and easy to move in.'처럼 말하세요.

例: Yes, I did. I often wore T-shirts because they were comfortable and easy to move in.

× I will. Three days of.

✓ I will wear them three days a week.

The original sentence is incomplete and does not properly express the future tense action. The modal verb 'will' should be followed by the base verb 'wear' to indicate future intention. Also, 'Three days of' is incomplete and should be 'three days a week' to specify frequency.

× I hope 10. I sometimes. Buy T-shirts.

✓ I hope to buy 10. I sometimes buy T-shirts.

The original sentences are fragmented and lack proper structure. 'I hope 10' is incomplete; it should be 'I hope to buy 10' to express intention. Also, 'I sometimes. Buy T-shirts.' should be combined into 'I sometimes buy T-shirts.' for grammatical correctness.

× I think.

✓ I think they are fashionable for older people in my country.

The answer 'I think.' is incomplete and does not address the question. A complete sentence expressing opinion is needed, such as 'I think they are fashionable for older people in my country.' This provides a clear and relevant response.

× As sorry did.

✓ Sorry, I did.

The phrase 'As sorry did.' is incorrect and unclear. The student likely intended to apologize and confirm past action. The correct form is 'Sorry, I did.' which uses the past tense auxiliary 'did' appropriately and includes an apology.