T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I usually wear T-shirts on hot days, especially at home because they are comfortable and easy to wash." Also, avoid repeating the same idea twice.

例: I usually wear T-shirts during the summer because they are comfortable and easy to wash. At home, I prefer them as they keep me cool on hot days.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clarify your ideas. For example, "I rarely buy T-shirts myself because I find it difficult to choose clothes that suit me. Instead, my mother and wife often buy them for me from the street market."

例: I rarely buy T-shirts myself because I find it hard to pick clothes that suit me. My mother and wife enjoy shopping at street markets and sometimes they buy T-shirts for me.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more precise vocabulary. For example, "T-shirts are generally not considered fashionable for older people in my country because they usually attend formal events like weddings or anniversaries, where casual clothes like T-shirts are inappropriate."

例: In my country, older people usually avoid wearing T-shirts because they attend formal events such as weddings and anniversaries, where more elegant clothing is expected. Therefore, T-shirts are seen as too casual for these occasions.

提案: Your answer has some unclear and incorrect phrases, such as "robbed buying". Try to use correct expressions and link your ideas smoothly. For example, "Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child, especially in summer, because they were comfortable. Also, my mother liked buying them since they were affordable and easy to wash."

例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts during my childhood, especially in the summer, because they were comfortable. My mother also liked buying them since they were affordable and easy to clean.

× It depends on the season, but especially on hot days I usually T-shirts, especially at home because it is very comfortable and easy to wash.

✓ It depends on the season, but especially on hot days I usually wear T-shirts, especially at home because they are very comfortable and easy to wash.

The original sentence is missing the verb 'wear' after 'I usually', which causes a sentence structure error. Also, 'it is very comfortable' should refer to 'T-shirts' (plural), so 'they are very comfortable' is correct. To improve, always ensure the verb is present and pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× No, I have never bought T-shirts on myself because I am not good at searching for clothes that suit me.

✓ No, I have never bought T-shirts for myself because I am not good at searching for clothes that suit me.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'myself'. The correct preposition is 'for' when indicating buying something for oneself. To improve, learn common prepositional phrases associated with verbs like 'buy for'.

× Is that my mother and wife love going to street market and to find clothes so they sometimes give them to me.

✓ It is my mother and wife who love going to the street market to find clothes, so they sometimes give them to me.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb structure at the beginning and misuses 'Is that'. The corrected sentence uses 'It is... who' to introduce the subject properly and corrects the infinitive phrase. To improve, use cleft sentences correctly and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Is that my mother and wife love going to street market and to find clothes so they sometimes give them to me.

✓ It is my mother and wife who love going to the street market to find clothes, so they sometimes give them to me.

The phrase 'going to street market' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'street market'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. To improve, remember to use 'the' with specific places like 'the street market'.

× In addition, my mother also robbed buying T-shirts as they were quite affordable and easy to wash, so she sometimes bought them.

✓ In addition, my mother also loved buying T-shirts as they were quite affordable and easy to wash, so she sometimes bought them.

The word 'robbed' is incorrectly used instead of 'loved'. This is a vocabulary error affecting pronoun reference and meaning. To improve, choose verbs that correctly express the intended meaning.