T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your sentences within five. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example.

例: I wear T-shirts every day because they are light and comfortable. For instance, I often pair them with shorts to stay cool during hot weather.

提案: Focus on clarity and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words to organize your answer logically. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and correct grammar to express your thoughts effectively.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I find lightweight and comfortable ones perfect for going out. They help me feel cool and relaxed during the day.

提案: Improve sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons or examples about older people's preferences for T-shirts.

例: T-shirts are quite popular among both young and older people in my country because they are light and comfortable. Moreover, older people prefer them since they are easy to wash and maintain.

提案: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with linking words. Avoid unnecessary repetition and express your ideas in a natural way.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts as a child because my mother preferred them and often bought them for me and my siblings. We enjoyed wearing them regularly because they were comfortable.

× Every day I mostly tend to wear T-shirt because it feels really cool and comfortable for me is it is not much heavy and to wear so therefore I would always wear T-shirt and sweet short to make me feel really light and cool.

✓ Every day I mostly tend to wear T-shirts because they feel really cool and comfortable for me as they are not very heavy to wear, so therefore I would always wear T-shirts and sweat shorts to make me feel really light and cool.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to wearing them generally every day. Also, 'sweet short' is incorrect; the correct term is 'sweat shorts'. The sentence also had awkward phrasing which was corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I like to wear T-shirt so I have bought, I have to buy a T-shirt for myself and I just loved our lightweight T-shirt and a comfortable oversight T-shirt which makes me feel really cool and cozy and it's all perfect to wear when you are going out.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I like to wear T-shirts so I have bought, I have to buy T-shirts for myself and I just love our lightweight T-shirts and comfortable oversized T-shirts which make me feel really cool and cozy and they are all perfect to wear when you are going out.

The singular 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking about multiple items. 'Oversight T-shirt' is incorrect; the correct term is 'oversized T-shirt'. Also, verb agreement was corrected to match plural subjects.

× Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I like to wear T-shirt so I have bought, I have to buy a T-shirt for myself and I just loved our lightweight T-shirt and a comfortable oversight T-shirt which makes me feel really cool and cozy and it's all perfect to wear when you are going out.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned earlier, I like to wear T-shirts so I have bought, I have to buy T-shirts for myself and I just love our lightweight T-shirts and comfortable oversized T-shirts which make me feel really cool and cozy and they are all perfect to wear when you are going out.

The adjective 'oversight' is incorrect in this context; the correct adjective is 'oversized' to describe the T-shirts. Also, 'loved' was changed to 'love' to maintain present tense consistency.

× It's quite fascinating about for T-shirt for the younger or the older people is people are more preference to wear light T-shirt is they're really comfortable to wear.

✓ It's quite fascinating that for T-shirts, both younger and older people prefer to wear light T-shirts because they are really comfortable to wear.

The singular 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring generally. Also, 'more preference' is incorrect; 'prefer' is the correct verb. The sentence was restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Especially for the older people they cannot they do not have to hectic to wash out to wear it.

✓ Especially for older people, they do not have to worry about washing them frequently to wear them.

The phrase 'have to hectic to wash out to wear it' is incorrect and unclear. It was corrected to 'do not have to worry about washing them frequently to wear them' to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Yes, I had wear T-shirt when I was a child as my mom always bought me T-shirt for me and my siblings as she also have personal preference to wear and to make us feel to wear it every time.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child as my mom always bought T-shirts for me and my siblings since she also had a personal preference to wear them and to make us feel comfortable wearing them every time.

The phrase 'I had wear' is incorrect; the correct past tense is 'I wore'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to multiple items. 'Have' was changed to 'had' to match past tense. The sentence was rephrased for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I had wear T-shirt when I was a child as my mom always bought me T-shirt for me and my siblings as she also have personal preference to wear and to make us feel to wear it every time.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a child as my mom always bought T-shirts for me and my siblings since she also had a personal preference to wear them and to make us feel comfortable wearing them every time.

The singular 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to multiple items. Also, pronouns were corrected to match plural nouns.

× So we have passionate about it and always have.

✓ So we have been passionate about them and always have been.

The phrase 'have passionate' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have been passionate'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to refer to plural T-shirts. The sentence was restructured for grammatical correctness and clarity.