T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but you can improve by using more precise vocabulary and avoiding minor grammatical errors. For example, instead of 'long T-shirt', say 'long-sleeved T-shirt', and instead of 'short T-shirts', say 'short-sleeved T-shirts'. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas more smoothly.

例: I usually wear long-sleeved T-shirts at home because they are comfortable and loose-fitting. However, when I go out, I prefer short-sleeved T-shirts as they are easy to maintain and keep me cool in warm weather, so I can stay comfortable both indoors and outdoors.

提案: Your answer is concise and relevant, but you can enhance it by adding a reason or example to support your statement. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to make your answer more coherent.

例: I don't buy T-shirts very often because I prefer to invest in quality clothes. However, when I go shopping and find a printed T-shirt I like, I usually buy it as a casual addition to my wardrobe.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains some vocabulary errors and lacks clarity. For example, 'former shirts' and 'casualty shirts' are incorrect terms. You should say 'formal shirts' and 'casual shirts'. Also, try to use linking words like 'while' or 'whereas' to compare ideas clearly.

例: In my country, older women generally prefer wearing traditional clothes like kurtas or sarees because they find them comfortable, whereas older men usually opt for formal shirts rather than casual shirts.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, 'order T-shirt' should be 'wore T-shirts', and 'it this combination' is incorrect. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'in fact' properly to improve coherence. Keep your answer within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, of course. When I was young, I often wore T-shirts paired with jeans because they were comfortable and allowed me to move around easily. In fact, this combination was my go-to outfit.

× Usually I wear long T-shirt when I am at home because they are comfortable and loose fitting.

✓ Usually I wear long T-shirts when I am at home because they are comfortable and loose fitting.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' because the sentence refers to wearing them generally and the pronoun 'they' indicates plural. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.

× In my country, older men usually opt for former shirts rather than casualty shirts.

✓ In my country, older men usually opt for formal shirts rather than casual shirts.

The words 'former' and 'casualty' are incorrect here; the intended words are 'formal' and 'casual'. This is a vocabulary error but also relates to adjective use. However, since 'casualty' is a noun and 'casual' is the adjective, this is an incorrect use of adjectives (ID 13). But as per instructions, only correct mistakes that meet the grammar problem list. Since 'incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' is ID 13, we correct it here.

× When I was young I often order T-shirt paired with jeans because they were comfortable and easy to move around and in fact it this combination was my go to outfit.

✓ When I was young I often ordered T-shirts paired with jeans because they were comfortable and easy to move around and in fact this combination was my go-to outfit.

The verb 'order' should be in past tense 'ordered' to match the past time frame indicated by 'When I was young'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to agree with 'paired with jeans'. The phrase 'it this combination' is incorrect; it should be 'this combination'. This is a past tense issue and singular/plural issue.