T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“summer is too hard to wear other clothes”应改为“it's too hot to wear other clothes”。建议使用更自然的表达，并且避免重复，比如“wear T-shirts could decrease my body temperature”可以改为“wearing T-shirts helps me stay cool”。

例: I often wear T-shirts in summer because it's too hot to wear other clothes. Wearing T-shirts helps me stay cool and comfortable, which is important for my health.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，如“haven't buy”应为“haven't bought”，“T-shirts is”应为“T-shirts are”，“warm out”应为“worn out”。建议注意时态和单复数的正确使用，并且表达更简洁自然。

例: No, I haven't bought T-shirts for a long time. I think it's unnecessary to buy them often, so I only buy new ones when the old ones are completely worn out.

提案: 回答不够直接且表达不清晰，“keep the body temperature in a character way”不自然且难以理解。建议直接回答问题，并用具体理由支持，比如老年人喜欢舒适和透气的衣服。

例: T-shirts are quite fashionable among older people in my country because they are comfortable and help keep cool during the hot summer months.

提案: 回答较好，但时态不一致，“I like it very much”应为“liked it very much”，“I wear it every day”应为“I wore it every day”。建议注意时态一致性，并且可以稍微丰富细节。

例: Yes, when I was a kid, my mom bought a T-shirt for me. I liked it very much and wore it every day during the summer because it was comfortable.

× I often wear T-shirts in summer because summer is too hard to wear other clothes.

✓ I often wear T-shirts in summer because summer is too hot to wear other clothes.

The phrase 'too hard to wear other clothes' is incorrect because 'hard' does not describe temperature. The correct adjective is 'hot' to express that summer weather makes wearing other clothes uncomfortable.

× Wear T-shirts could decrease my body temperature.

✓ Wearing T-shirts could decrease my body temperature.

The verb 'wear' should be in the gerund form 'wearing' after modal verbs like 'could' when used as the subject of the sentence.

× No, I haven't buy T-shirts for a long time.

✓ No, I haven't bought T-shirts for a long time.

After 'haven't' (have not), the past participle form of the verb should be used. 'Buy' is the base form; the past participle is 'bought'.

× I think T-shirts is not necessary to buy so I only buy a new ones when the old ones completely warm out.

✓ I think T-shirts are not necessary to buy so I only buy new ones when the old ones completely wear out.

'T-shirts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'a new ones' is incorrect because 'ones' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. The phrase 'warm out' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'wear out'.

× In summer, I wear it every day.

✓ In summer, I wore it every day.

The question refers to the past ('when you were a kid'), so the verb tense should be past tense 'wore' instead of present tense 'wear'.