T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Start with a direct response to the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. For example, say how often you wear T-shirts and why you prefer them.

例: I usually wear T-shirts several times a week because they are very comfortable and suit my style. Moreover, I find them cool and easy to match with other clothes.

提案: Improve your sentence structure and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, be specific about how often you buy T-shirts and what kinds you prefer.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I enjoy having a variety. For instance, I usually choose T-shirts in different colours and patterns to match different occasions.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using proper grammar and linking words. Directly answer the question about fashion, then explain why older people wear T-shirts, focusing on comfort and practicality.

例: In my country, T-shirts are not considered very fashionable for older people. However, many older people wear them because they are comfortable and easy to put on.

提案: Use correct verb tenses and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific examples with linking words to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid. For example, I liked Spider-Man and Batman T-shirts because I admired those characters.

× I like to wear T-shirt because that's so comfortable for me and that's little me, so handsome and cool and that's why I choose T-shirts.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts because they're so comfortable for me and they suit me well, so handsome and cool, and that's why I choose T-shirts.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when talking generally. Also, 'that's little me' is unclear and incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'they suit me well' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I am often to buy T-shirts because I like buying different type of T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts because I like buying different types of T-shirts.

The phrase 'I am often to buy' is incorrect; the modal or adverb 'often' should be used with the base verb 'buy' as 'I often buy'. Also, 'different type' should be plural 'different types' to match plural noun 'T-shirts'.

× Most of the time I like two different colors and different patterns.

✓ Most of the time I like two different colors and different patterns.

This sentence is correct in terms of singular and plural usage; no correction needed here.

× I think not about a fashion, it can easy to wear them.

✓ I don't think much about fashion; it's easy to wear them.

The phrase 'I think not about a fashion' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't think much about fashion'. Also, 'it can easy to wear them' is incorrect; it should be 'it's easy to wear them'.

× That's why old people wearing T-shirts and that's for a comfort, comfortable.

✓ That's why old people wear T-shirts, and that's for comfort.

The verb 'wearing' should be in simple present tense 'wear' to agree with the subject 'old people'. Also, 'that's for a comfort, comfortable' is incorrect; it should be 'that's for comfort'.

× Yes, I wear T-shirts when I was a kid, like Spider-Man T-shirts, Batman T-shirts, because I'm very like that type of characters and wear that type of T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid, like Spider-Man T-shirts and Batman T-shirts, because I really liked those types of characters and wore those types of T-shirts.

The verb 'wear' should be in past tense 'wore' to match 'when I was a kid'. Also, 'I'm very like' is incorrect; it should be 'I really liked'. The plural forms 'types' and 'those' are needed to agree with plural nouns.