T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'teachers is'. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và dùng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually wear T-shirts two or three times a week, especially in summer. They are very comfortable and versatile, so I can easily match them with different clothes.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ như 'for for'. Hãy thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và sử dụng từ vựng phong phú hơn để mô tả thói quen mua sắm của bạn.

例: I don't buy T-shirts very often, maybe one every few months. Since they are basic items, I prefer to buy high-quality ones in neutral colors like black and white, so they last longer and match many outfits.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, đúng ngữ pháp và thêm từ nối để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Older people in my country often wear T-shirts because they are affordable, usually around $10. Sometimes, they prefer thicker T-shirts or polo shirts for more comfort.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý thì động từ (wear -> wore) và cấu trúc câu. Hãy nói câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts often as a kid because they were perfect for physical activities and very comfortable. My mum usually bought many T-shirts for me.

× I think I wear T-shirt very often, about two or three times per week, uh, especially in the summer because teachers is kind of, uh, very comfortable and relaxed when you wear it and it's just a basic item that you can mix with everything.

✓ I think I wear T-shirts very often, about two or three times per week, uh, especially in the summer because T-shirts are kind of, uh, very comfortable and relaxed when you wear them and they're just basic items that you can mix with everything.

The word 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to multiple instances. Also, 'teachers is' is incorrect; it should be 'T-shirts are' to agree in number. Pronouns referring to plural nouns should also be plural ('them' instead of 'it'). This improves subject-verb agreement and pronoun consistency.

× Not really, I buy one T-shirt per few months because T-shirt is a basic item and you just have to buy once and you can wear it many times.

✓ Not really, I buy one T-shirt every few months because a T-shirt is a basic item and you just have to buy it once and you can wear it many times.

The phrase 'per few months' is incorrect; 'every few months' is the correct expression. Also, 'T-shirt is' needs an article 'a' before 'T-shirt' to be grammatically correct. Additionally, 'buy once' should be 'buy it once' to include the object.

× So I often buy a high quality T-shirt for for myself. I often buy a black, white and a basic uh color.

✓ So I often buy a high-quality T-shirt for myself. I often buy black, white, and basic colors.

'High quality' should be hyphenated as 'high-quality' when used as an adjective before a noun. The phrase 'a black, white and a basic uh color' is incorrect; colors should be plural without articles when listing multiple colors. Also, remove the repeated 'for'.

× So old people in my country are very often wear T-shirt because it's kinda cheap and it was just affordable.

✓ So old people in my country very often wear T-shirts because they're kind of cheap and just affordable.

'Are very often wear' is incorrect; it should be 'very often wear' without 'are'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring generally. 'It's kinda cheap' should be 'they're kind of cheap' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. 'Was just affordable' should be 'just affordable' to maintain present tense.

× T-shirt in my country is going just about around $10 and T-shirt for old people, it can be more thicker it and or it have a polo.

✓ T-shirts in my country cost just about $10, and T-shirts for old people can be thicker or have a polo collar.

'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Is going just about around' is awkward; 'cost just about' is clearer. 'More thicker' is incorrect; 'thicker' alone suffices. 'It can be more thicker it and or it have a polo' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'can be thicker or have a polo collar'.

× Yes, when I was a kid I wear T-shirt very often because T-shirt is kinda perfect for the physical activities and when you wear T-shirt, uh, it was very comfortable.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I wore T-shirts very often because T-shirts were kind of perfect for physical activities and when you wore T-shirts, uh, they were very comfortable.

Since the time is past ('when I was a kid'), verbs should be in past tense: 'wear' to 'wore', 'is' to 'were', 'wear' to 'wore', and 'was' to 'were'. Also, 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring generally. Pronouns should agree in number ('they' instead of 'it').

× So by mum often buy a lot of T-shirt for me.

✓ So my mum often bought a lot of T-shirts for me.

The sentence refers to past habitual action, so 'buy' should be in past tense 'bought'. 'By mum' is incorrect; it should be 'my mum'. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when referring to multiple items.