T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words and repetition, and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you could say: "I usually wear T-shirts about three times a week, mainly at home. However, during the summer, I also wear them when I go outside."

例: I usually wear T-shirts about three times a week, mainly at home. However, during the summer, I also wear them when I go outside.

提案: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to be clear and direct, and avoid contradictory statements. Use linking words to explain your reasons. For example: "No, I don't often buy T-shirts because I don't like wearing them much. Usually, the T-shirts I wear are gifts from my friends, and I really enjoy wearing those."

例: No, I don't often buy T-shirts because I don't like wearing them much. Usually, the T-shirts I wear are gifts from my friends, and I really enjoy wearing those.

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Use linking words to explain your point and provide specific details. For example: "T-shirts are not considered very fashionable among older people in my country. However, many older people wear them regularly because they are comfortable and practical."

例: T-shirts are not considered very fashionable among older people in my country. However, many older people wear them regularly because they are comfortable and practical.

提案: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and structured. Avoid filler words like "uh" and clarify your points with linking words. For example: "Yes, I did wear T-shirts as a kid. Although I don't remember much, I have many pictures taken by my grandfather that show me wearing T-shirts from Saint Pete."

例: Yes, I did wear T-shirts as a kid. Although I don't remember much, I have many pictures taken by my grandfather that show me wearing T-shirts from Saint Pete.

× I would say because I'm using T-shirts as a home wearing thing.

✓ I would say because I use T-shirts as home wear.

The phrase 'I'm using' is incorrect here because the present continuous tense is not appropriate for habitual actions. Instead, the simple present tense 'I use' should be used to express regular habits or routines.

× Also in summertime I you I wear T-shirts to go outside.

✓ Also in summertime, I wear T-shirts to go outside.

The phrase 'I you I' is a pronoun misuse and likely a typographical error. It should be corrected to 'I' only to maintain subject consistency and clarity.

× I usually wear T-shirts three times in a week.

✓ I usually wear T-shirts three times a week.

The phrase 'in a week' is incorrect when expressing frequency. The correct expression is 'a week' without 'in' to indicate how often something happens.

× No, I don't, even though I don't like to wear T-shirts, but I vary by myself.

✓ No, I don't. Even though I don't like to wear T-shirts, I vary by myself.

Using both 'even though' and 'but' together is redundant and incorrect. The sentence should be split or one conjunction removed to improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Usually the T-shirts which I wear is from my friend's gift.

✓ Usually the T-shirts which I wear are from my friend's gift.

The subject 'T-shirts' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× Old older people are also wear T-shirts very often, which is very common in my hometown.

✓ Older people also wear T-shirts very often, which is very common in my hometown.

The phrase 'Old older people are also wear' is incorrect. 'Old older people' is redundant and 'are also wear' is grammatically wrong. The correct form is 'Older people also wear'.

× However, I don't remember, but uh, there are a lot of pictures which my grandfather took so that I can recognize where I'm.

✓ However, I don't remember, but there are a lot of pictures which my grandfather took so that I can recognise where I am.

The phrase 'where I'm' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'where I am' to form a correct clause. Also, 'recognise' is the Australian English spelling.