T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, clarify the difference between weekends and weekdays and avoid repeating similar ideas.

例: I often wear T-shirts on weekends because it's my day off and I can dress comfortably. On weekdays, I usually wear uniforms, and at home, I prefer pajamas.

提案: Avoid filler words and repetition to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, try to expand your answer with specific reasons or examples.

例: I don't buy T-shirts often because I already have many. However, if I find one I like, I usually purchase it since I tend to keep my clothes for a long time.

提案: Improve sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide more specific details or examples about fashion trends among older people.

例: In my country, T-shirts are generally not very fashionable for older people. Most are plain, and if they have graphics, they usually feature simple designs like names or letters.

提案: Use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy. Connect your ideas with linking words and provide clear reasons or examples to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I usually wore T-shirts as a kid. I only wore dresses or other clothes for special occasions like birthday parties or church; on regular days, T-shirts were my go-to choice.

× I often wear T-shirts on weekend because it's my day off and I can wear anything that I wanted to wear and T-shirt is comfortable for me so I usually prefer to wear T-shirt on weekdays.

✓ I often wear T-shirts on weekends because it's my day off and I can wear anything that I want to wear and T-shirts are comfortable for me so I usually prefer to wear T-shirts on weekdays.

The word 'weekend' should be plural 'weekends' because it refers to repeated occasions. 'Wanted' should be 'want' to match the present tense context. 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' to agree with the plural subject and context. Also, 'T-shirt is comfortable' should be 'T-shirts are comfortable' to agree in number.

× I often wear T-shirts on weekend because it's my day off and I can wear anything that I wanted to wear and T-shirt is comfortable for me so I usually prefer to wear T-shirt on weekdays.

✓ I often wear T-shirts on weekends because it's my day off and I can wear anything that I want to wear and T-shirts are comfortable for me so I usually prefer to wear T-shirts on weekdays.

The verb 'wanted' is in past tense but the sentence is describing a habitual present action, so it should be 'want' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I wear my uniforms and pajamas at home so.

✓ I wear my uniform and pajamas at home.

The word 'uniforms' should be singular 'uniform' because typically one uniform is worn. The sentence ending with 'so' is incomplete and unnecessary here, so it is removed for clarity.

× I wear my uniforms and pajamas at home so.

✓ I wear my uniform and pajamas at home.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'so' which makes it incomplete and unclear. Removing 'so' corrects the sentence structure.

× I don't often buy T-shirts, but when I see one that I like I usually buy it. I have a lot of T-shirts already and I it it it I can keep it it I keep it for a long time so I don't usually buy new ones.

✓ I don't often buy T-shirts, but when I see one that I like, I usually buy it. I have a lot of T-shirts already and I can keep them for a long time, so I don't usually buy new ones.

The phrase 'I it it it I can keep it it' is repetitive and unclear. It should be corrected to 'I can keep them' to refer properly to the plural 'T-shirts'. Adding commas improves readability.

× Yes, when I was a kid I usually wear T-shirts at all times.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I usually wore T-shirts at all times.

The verb 'wear' is in present tense but the sentence refers to past time 'when I was a kid', so it should be 'wore' to match past tense.