T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không hoàn chỉnh và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu.

例: I usually wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable and casual. I especially like graphic T-shirts that show my personality. They are made of breathable fabric, which makes them perfect for warm weather. Wearing them helps me feel relaxed and easy to talk to. Overall, T-shirts are my favorite casual wear.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Hãy sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: I often buy T-shirts at the end of the month when I have some extra money. I usually go to the department store downtown and pick the ones I like. Then, I try them on in the fitting room to see if they fit me well. I prefer T-shirts that are comfortable and suit my style. Buying T-shirts is a way for me to refresh my wardrobe.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: In my country, T-shirts are not very fashionable among older people. Most older adults prefer more formal clothes. However, some older people wear T-shirts occasionally for comfort. Although T-shirts may not fit them perfectly, they wear them for a change. Overall, T-shirts are more popular among younger people.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và không rõ ràng, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý. Hãy sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và giới hạn câu trả lời trong 5 câu.

例: When I was a kid, I often wore T-shirts, especially when I was playing outside. Although my school uniform did not include T-shirts, I liked to wear them to feel more comfortable. T-shirts helped me relax my dress code when I was with my friends. They were my favorite casual clothes during childhood. I still enjoy wearing T-shirts today.

× He shows a graphic tee with fits me perfectly.

✓ He shows a graphic tee that fits me perfectly.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'with fits' instead of 'that fits'. The relative pronoun 'that' is needed to introduce the clause describing the tee, and 'fits' is the correct verb form here.

× It just showcases my personality and making everyone feels like an easy going and casual and easy to talk to.

✓ It just showcases my personality and makes everyone feel like I am easy-going, casual, and easy to talk to.

The sentence incorrectly mixes verb forms: 'showcases' (present simple) with 'making' (present participle). Both verbs should be in the same tense. Also, 'feels' should be 'feel' to agree with 'everyone' as the subject of the clause. Additionally, 'easy going' should be hyphenated as 'easy-going'.

× Especially those aunties with Prince imagery.

✓ Especially those aunties with Prince imagery on their T-shirts.

The sentence fragment lacks a verb and is incomplete. Adding 'on their T-shirts' clarifies the meaning and completes the thought.

× AI generated images on the bag that make them look one-of-a-kind and feels pretty comfy and breathable in such breathable fabric.

✓ AI-generated images on the bag make them look one-of-a-kind and feel pretty comfy and breathable because of the breathable fabric.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors: 'images' (plural) should be followed by 'make' and 'feel' (plural verbs). Also, 'AI generated' should be hyphenated as 'AI-generated'. The phrase 'in such breathable fabric' is awkward and is better expressed as 'because of the breathable fabric'.

× Generated an imagery so at the end of the month when I feel flash, when I felt like buying one of those teas, I will hit the department store downtown and I'm just a pick up and grab one of those T-shirts.

✓ I generated an image, so at the end of the month when I feel flush and want to buy one of those tees, I go to the department store downtown and just pick up one of those T-shirts.

The original sentence has tense inconsistencies and unclear phrasing. 'Generated an imagery' is incomplete; 'I generated an image' is clearer. 'Feel flash' is likely a mishearing of 'feel flush' (having money). 'Teas' should be 'tees' (T-shirts). The future tense 'I will hit' is inconsistent with the habitual action described; present simple 'I go' is better.

× I'm getting straight into the fitting room, trying them on, putting them on in order to see if if it's me perfectly and T-shirts I would rather have them playing.

✓ I go straight into the fitting room, try them on to see if they fit me perfectly, and I would rather have T-shirts that fit well.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and repetition ('if if'). 'It's me perfectly' should be 'they fit me perfectly' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. 'Have them playing' is unclear and likely incorrect; 'have T-shirts that fit well' is clearer.

× And they are not. They must go on a kibber for older folks in my country when let's say that they really have a thing for T-shirt.

✓ And they are not. They must be considered a kipper for older folks in my country, assuming they really like T-shirts.

The original sentence is unclear and contains possible misheard words ('kibber' and 'kipper'). Assuming 'kipper' is intended as a term, the sentence needs restructuring for clarity. Also, 'have a thing for T-shirt' should be 'like T-shirts' or 'have a thing for T-shirts' (plural).

× If they really try to put them on every once in a blue moon, I would say it may not fit them perfectly, but it gives them something for a change if well older people they are often into.

✓ If they really try to wear them once in a blue moon, I would say they may not fit perfectly, but it gives them something different. Well, older people are often into that.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incomplete thoughts. 'Try to put them on' is better as 'try to wear them'. 'It may not fit them' should be 'they may not fit perfectly' to agree with plural 'T-shirts'. The last part is incomplete and needs clarification.

× Back in the days when I was a child, I was knee high into a grasshopper.

✓ Back in the days when I was a child, I was knee-high to a grasshopper.

The phrase 'knee high into a grasshopper' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'knee-high to a grasshopper', meaning very small or young. Also, 'knee-high' should be hyphenated.

× I would often Don T-shirt as a compliment to my formal outfit because part of my uniform doesn't have a T-shirt.

✓ I would often don a T-shirt as a complement to my formal outfit because part of my uniform doesn't include a T-shirt.

'Don' means to put on, so it should be followed by an article 'a'. 'Compliment' (praise) is incorrect here; the correct word is 'complement' (something that completes). Also, 'doesn't have a T-shirt' is better expressed as 'doesn't include a T-shirt'.

× But they wear their trousers and shirts and perhaps wear T-shirt is like something that I want to relax my dress code and when hanging out with my friends is.

✓ But they wear their trousers and shirts, and perhaps wearing a T-shirt is something I do to relax my dress code when hanging out with my friends.

The sentence has pronoun and structure errors. 'Wear T-shirt is like something that I want' is incorrect; it should be 'wearing a T-shirt is something I do'. The sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring for clarity.