T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid irrelevant or confusing details, such as mentioning 'my favorite teacher is blue in color.' Instead, focus on directly answering the question with clear, natural sentences and provide specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I often wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and versatile. For example, I usually wear them when I go out with my friends or relax at home, as they suit casual occasions well.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating the same idea.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts when I go shopping because they are more comfortable than other clothes. Moreover, T-shirts are suitable for various occasions and can be worn by people of all ages.

提案: Your answer is brief and lacks specific details. Try to expand your response by giving reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and improve coherence. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'person to person' and use more natural expressions.

例: The fashionability of T-shirts among older people varies. Some older individuals prefer wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and casual, while others may choose more formal clothing depending on their personal style.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases, which affect clarity. Avoid repetition and irrelevant details. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words to improve flow.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts often when I was a kid. I had a favorite T-shirt that I wore every day, even when it was dirty, which sometimes upset my mom because she wanted me to wash it more often.

× That's I often wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and suitable for every occasion.

✓ I often wear T-shirts because they are very comfortable and suitable for every occasion.

The phrase 'That's I often wear T-shirts' is incorrect in sentence structure. 'That's' is a contraction of 'that is' and does not fit here. The correct sentence should start directly with the subject 'I'.

× For example, my favorite teacher is blue in color.

✓ For example, my favorite T-shirt is blue in color.

The word 'teacher' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'T-shirt' to match the topic. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects sentence correctness.

× I like wearing when I go out with my friends and relaxing at home.

✓ I like wearing them when I go out with my friends and when I am relaxing at home.

The sentence lacks an object after 'wearing' and has inconsistent verb forms. Adding 'them' clarifies the object, and parallel structure is maintained by adding 'when I am' before 'relaxing.'

× Yes, whenever I go outside for shopping I usually buy some T-shirts because I feel comfortable in T-shirt rather than other outfits and T-shirt can usually wears on every occasion and it is suitable for every age group.

✓ Yes, whenever I go outside for shopping, I usually buy some T-shirts because I feel comfortable in T-shirts rather than other outfits, and T-shirts can usually be worn on every occasion and are suitable for every age group.

The singular 'T-shirt' is incorrectly used where plural 'T-shirts' is needed. Also, 'can usually wears' is incorrect; it should be 'can usually be worn' to use the passive voice correctly.

× T-shirt can usually wears on every occasion and it is suitable for every age group.

✓ T-shirts can usually be worn on every occasion and are suitable for every age group.

The modal verb 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb. 'Wears' is incorrect; the passive form 'be worn' is needed here.

× Well, it totally depends upon person to person.

✓ Well, it totally depends on the person.

The phrase 'depends upon person to person' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'depends on the person.'

× When I was a kid, I always wear one T-shirt every day.

✓ When I was a kid, I always wore one T-shirt every day.

The sentence refers to a past time ('when I was a kid'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'wore' instead of the present tense 'wear.'

× Please throw this T-shirt that was dirty, but I can't throw this throat T-shirt because that's what my favorite.

✓ Please throw away this T-shirt that is dirty, but I can't throw away this T-shirt because it's my favorite.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun use and awkward phrasing. 'That was dirty' should be 'that is dirty' to describe the current state. 'Throat T-shirt' is likely a typo for 'that T-shirt.' Also, 'that's what my favorite' is incorrect; it should be 'it's my favorite.'