T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more fluent and grammatically correct by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Also, clarify your points with more precise vocabulary and sentence structure.

例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because I am a student and don't need to dress formally. Therefore, T-shirts are a convenient and comfortable choice for me when I go outside.

提案: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and pronunciation errors, and by using clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts. I prefer plain ones without any pictures or cartoon characters. I usually choose colors I like, and I make sure the T-shirt fits my body well.

提案: Focus on clarity and grammar. Avoid redundancy and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically and provide specific examples.

例: I don't think older people in my country often wear T-shirts because they prefer comfortable or colorful clothing. Most of them choose traditional patterns that reflect their culture.

提案: Improve grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide clearer explanations with specific details.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid because my parents thought children could wear cheap and colorful T-shirts. They believed these clothes could represent my personality and looked cute.

× I often wear T-shirts I think almost every day because currently I'm I am a student and I don't need to wear very formal dresses to walk.

✓ I often wear T-shirts, I think almost every day, because currently I am a student and I don't need to wear very formal dresses to go out.

The phrase 'to walk' is incorrect in this context; the correct expression is 'to go out' when referring to leaving the house. Also, 'I'm I am' is redundant; only one form should be used. The sentence also needs commas for clarity.

× So I think the T-shirt is quite convenient choices to me to to go outside.

✓ So I think T-shirts are quite convenient choices for me to go outside.

The subject 'T-shirt' is singular but 'choices' is plural, causing a mismatch. Both should agree in number. Also, 'to to' is a typo and 'to me' should be 'for me' to indicate suitability.

× I prefer buy the solo, uh, solo solo soldered T-shirts without any pictures or uh, cartoon characters in the T-shirts.

✓ I prefer to buy plain, solid-colored T-shirts without any pictures or cartoon characters on them.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb ('to buy'). Also, 'solo soldered' is incorrect; the intended phrase is 'plain, solid-colored'. 'In the T-shirts' should be 'on them' for correct preposition use.

× So I just buy the color I like and I think if that fit my body is quite good.

✓ So I just buy the colors I like and I think if they fit my body, they are quite good.

'Color' should be plural 'colors' to match 'I like' which implies multiple colors. 'That fit' should be 'they fit' to agree with plural 'colors'. Also, the sentence needs commas for clarity.

× I don't think that older people in my country, they will lie the T-shirts 'cause I know they, most of them, they prefer where they are comfortable or colourful clothing than the T-shirts.

✓ I don't think that older people in my country like T-shirts because I know most of them prefer wearing comfortable or colorful clothing rather than T-shirts.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'older people'. 'Lie' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'like'. 'Where they are comfortable' should be 'wearing comfortable'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So most of them, I think they will, uh, choose the brand patterns to reflect their.

✓ So most of them, I think, will choose branded patterns to express themselves.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Choose the brand patterns to reflect their' is incomplete; it should specify what is being reflected. 'Express themselves' is a clearer phrase. Also, unnecessary fillers like 'uh' should be removed.

× Yes, I have wear T-shirt when I was kid because my parents think, uh, Childs can just choose quite cheap or colorful, uh, T-shirts.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts when I was a kid because my parents thought children could just choose quite cheap or colorful T-shirts.

'Have wear' is incorrect; the past tense 'wore' should be used. 'When I was kid' needs the article 'a'. 'Think' should be past tense 'thought' to match the past context. 'Childs' is incorrect plural; the correct word is 'children'. Modal verb 'can' should be 'could' for past ability.

× It's the can represent my personality and it's very cute, they think.

✓ They think it can represent my personality and that it's very cute.

The sentence has incorrect pronoun order and structure. 'It's the can represent' is incorrect; it should be 'it can represent'. The subject 'they' should come before 'think'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.