T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I wear T-shirts very often because they are comfortable and versatile. Usually, I wear them at home or when I go out with my friends. Sometimes, I layer a blouse over a T-shirt to create a stylish look. Overall, T-shirts are my favorite clothing item for daily wear.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and incomplete at the end. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and complete your sentences. Also, avoid filler words like 'uh' to make your speech more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts because there are many options available in different colors, shapes, and designs. Moreover, their graphics make them attractive and easy to match with various outfits. Therefore, I enjoy shopping for T-shirts regularly.

提案: Your answer has good content but lacks coherence and contains some grammatical mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same words. Also, try to provide a clear opinion supported by reasons.

例: T-shirts are quite comfortable, so many older people in my country wear them. However, they may not find them very fashionable because they are accustomed to wearing suits or dresses. In the past, T-shirts were not commonly worn outside, but nowadays, comfort is more important than fashion for them.

提案: Your answer is quite good but a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Avoid informal phrases like 'and stuff' to sound more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts almost all year round except during cold seasons like winter and autumn. They were very comfortable and colorful because my mother bought me bright colors such as yellow and pink. I loved wearing them as a child, especially when playing in the park.

× I believe I've heard them pretty often and my whole closet is basically just T-shirts and I match them with many different things.

✓ I believe I wear them pretty often and my whole closet is basically just T-shirts and I match them with many different things.

The original sentence uses 'I've heard' which means 'I have heard', implying listening rather than wearing. The question is about how often the student wears T-shirts, so the verb should be in present tense 'I wear' to correctly answer the question.

× I can just wear them at home or when I'm going out with my friends I just put on a blouse on it.

✓ I can just wear them at home or when I'm going out with my friends I just put a blouse on over it.

The phrase 'put on a blouse on it' is awkward and incorrect. The correct expression is 'put a blouse on over it' to indicate layering clothes. Also, 'put on' is a phrasal verb and should not be repeated.

× And so I would say like maybe in my entire life I've been live wearing T-shirts.

✓ And so I would say like maybe in my entire life I've been living wearing T-shirts.

The phrase 'I've been live wearing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I've been living wearing' or better 'I have been wearing' to express continuous action. 'Live' is an adjective or verb unrelated here.

× Yes, because there are always many options to choose from and there are many different colors and shapes and, uh their graphics on it and you just have this variety of beautiful T-shirts where you could choose from and you could always match them with anything that you want.

✓ Yes, because there are always many options to choose from and there are many different colors and shapes and, uh, graphics on them and you just have this variety of beautiful T-shirts to choose from and you can always match them with anything that you want.

The phrase 'their graphics on it' is incorrect because 'their' is a pronoun that does not agree with 'T-shirts' here. Also, 'where you could choose from' is incorrect; it should be 'to choose from'. 'You could' is better as 'you can' for present habitual action.

× So I often buy them off the.

✓ So I often buy them off the shelf.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'off the' which is incomplete. The correct phrase is 'off the shelf' meaning buying from available stock.

× But I don't think they really like it. Or the only reason they like it is because it's come because of its comfort.

✓ But I don't think they really like it. The only reason they like it is because of its comfort.

The phrase 'it's come because of its comfort' is incorrect. It should be 'because of its comfort'. Also, 'Or' at the beginning of the sentence is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× Because back at their time they wouldn't really wear T-shirts outside, but now they prefer comfort over fashion.

✓ Because back in their time they didn't really wear T-shirts outside, but now they prefer comfort over fashion.

The phrase 'back at their time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'back in their time'. Also, 'wouldn't really wear' is better expressed as 'didn't really wear' to indicate past habitual action.

× Yes, I was basically wearing T-shirts all year except for the cold seasons like winter and autumn, and they were really comfortable and they were really colorful like my mother used to buy me like bright colored T-shirts, like bright yellow or pink.

✓ Yes, I basically wore T-shirts all year except for the cold seasons like winter and autumn, and they were really comfortable and really colorful. My mother used to buy me bright colored T-shirts, like bright yellow or pink.

The phrase 'I was basically wearing' is awkward for habitual past action; 'I basically wore' is better. Also, the sentence is long and repetitive with 'like' used too many times; breaking it into two sentences improves clarity.

× As a child they were really comfortable for park and playing and stuff.

✓ As a child they were really comfortable for playing in the park and other activities.

The phrase 'for park and playing' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'playing in the park'. Also, 'and stuff' is informal and vague; replacing it with 'and other activities' is clearer.