T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Speak more clearly and organize your answer. Start with a direct topic sentence stating frequency, then give one or two clear reasons or examples. Use simple correct grammar (e.g., 'I usually wear T-shirts in summer because the weather is hot. I also wear them on holiday because they're comfortable.') Keep answers to no more than 4–5 short sentences and avoid repetition.

例: I usually wear T-shirts in the summer because the weather is hot. I also wear them when I go on holiday since they are comfortable and easy to pack. For example, last summer I wore T-shirts every day at the beach.

提案: Answer directly and use correct vocabulary. Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No), then give a reason and a specific example. Avoid unrelated words. Use present simple for habits: 'I sometimes buy T-shirts when I have spare money. For instance...'

例: Yes, I sometimes buy T-shirts when I have spare money. For example, I bought three new T-shirts last month because my old ones were worn out.

提案: Give a direct evaluation and support it with a clear reason or example. Use comparative or descriptive vocabulary (e.g., 'quite common', 'considered casual'). Structure: topic sentence + reason + brief example. Reduce fillers like 'um' and avoid repeating phrases.

例: T-shirts are quite common and acceptable for older people in my country because many value comfort. For instance, older men often wear simple plain T-shirts when visiting the market or meeting friends.

提案: Answer clearly with a direct past-tense statement, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid irrelevant or confusing phrases. Keep sentences concise and grammatical: 'Yes, I often wore T-shirts as a child because they were easy to wash and comfortable.'

例: Yes, I often wore T-shirts when I was a child because they were comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I remember wearing T-shirts every day to play outside and to school on casual days.

× Basically is on the summer but be because the summer is the weather too is hot.

✓ Basically, in summer, because the weather is too hot, I wear T-shirts.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing subjects and prepositions. Use 'in summer' for the season, include the subject 'the weather', and place clauses in a logical order. Suggestion: build the sentence as 'in summer, because the weather is too hot, I wear T-shirts.'

× That's why I can wear the T-shirt and when I go to the holiday is important I I wear the dishes the fall.

✓ That's why I can wear T-shirts, and when I go on holiday, I wear casual clothes in the fall.

The original mixes incorrect pronouns and nouns ('the holiday', 'the dishes') and repeats words. Use 'go on holiday' and 'wear casual clothes' or 'wear T-shirts' if intended. Remove repeated words and choose correct nouns.

× Yeah, sometime I buy some dessert, uh, when I have the money I will do it.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I buy some T-shirts when I have the money.

The student used 'sometime' (should be 'sometimes') and mixed future 'will' with a habitual action. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'I sometimes buy T-shirts when I have the money.' Also 'dessert' is incorrect word choice; use 'T-shirts.'

× It's good. Umm, uh, I, I feel, I feel comfortable when they wear this, like, yeah.

✓ It's good. I feel comfortable when older people wear T-shirts.

Original 'they wear this' is vague. Specify the subject 'older people' and the object 'T-shirts'. Remove filler repetitions. Use clear noun phrases for clarity.

× Of course, like wet when when I eat the the the the egg, like when I grow up, I always wear AT shirt.

✓ Of course. When I was a child and when I grew up, I always wore T-shirts.

The original mixes present and past tenses and contains repeated words and wrong vocabulary ('wet', 'AT shirt'). Use past tense 'was'/'wore' for past habits: 'When I was a child... I always wore T-shirts.'

× Every people all wear a T-shirt.

✓ Everyone wears T-shirts.

'Every people' is incorrect; use 'everyone' or 'every person'. Also use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements. Correct subject-verb agreement: 'everyone wears.'

× Is it? It's basic and simple. Not too hard for wedding.

✓ They're basic and simple. They are not too formal for weddings.

Use plural agreement 'they're' to refer to T-shirts. 'Not too hard for wedding' is incorrect adjective choice; use 'not too formal for weddings.' Also include article or plural 'weddings.'