T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating frequency, avoid unrelated words, and give one or two concise reasons with linking words. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “comfortable,” “easy to move in”) and check grammar (subject-verb agreement, avoid repeated or unclear phrases). Aim for 2–3 sentences, each focused and natural.

例: I wear T-shirts almost every day because I find them comfortable and practical for work. For example, they are easy to move in and simple to pair with different trousers, so I can dress quickly in the morning.

提案: Answer clearly with a topic sentence about how often you buy them, then give a specific reason and an example. Use accurate words for items (e.g., “T-shirts,” “fabric”) and linking words like “because” or “for example.” Keep to 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

例: Yes, I buy T-shirts quite often, usually every few months because they wear out quickly. For example, I like soft cotton T-shirts since the fabric is breathable and goes well with jeans or chinos.

提案: Start with a clear opinion (e.g., “They are moderately fashionable”) then support it with specific reasons and examples. Avoid unclear words and pronunciation errors; use correct nouns (e.g., “older people”), and link ideas with words like “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Limit to 2–3 clear sentences.

例: T-shirts are moderately fashionable among older people in my country because most prefer comfort over trends. For example, many choose neutral colors and loose fits so they feel comfortable for daily activities.

提案: Give a direct answer and then add a specific memory or reason. Use correct words (e.g., “T-shirts,” “designs”) and linking words (“because,” “for example”). Keep sentences grammatical and avoid mixing unrelated words like “dessert.” Two sentences are enough.

例: Yes, I used to wear T-shirts almost every day as a child because my parents bought me many with fun designs. For example, I had several with cartoon prints that I wore to school and playtime.

× I work so usually every day because it's more comfortable and wedding dessert makes me feel more comfortable and also easy to wear and adjust anything and it's feels just wow.

✓ I wear T-shirts almost every day because they are comfortable, easy to put on and adjust, and they feel great.

Student used 'I work so usually every day' incorrectly instead of describing habitual action; present simple 'I wear' is appropriate for routines. Pronoun and noun forms were incorrect ('it's' for plural T-shirts), and 'wedding dessert' and 'it's feels' are wrong words/forms. Suggestion: use present simple for habits, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct nouns (T-shirts) and adjectives (comfortable).

× Yeah, I often buy Tesor for use. I love Tissot and it's everyone favorite kind of thing because we easily wear its tissue and pant and just go with everything. That's why.

✓ Yes, I often buy T-shirts to wear. I like T-shirts because everyone likes them; they are made of soft fabric and go with many pants and outfits.

Many word choices were incorrect (Tesor, Tissot) and articles were missing or wrong. Use 'to wear' for purpose and plural 'T-shirts' and 'they' for plural pronoun reference. Suggestion: replace incorrect nouns with 'T-shirts', use plural forms and proper pronouns, and include articles where needed ('a', 'the' only if specific).

× Tea sore in our country for older people, they were disordered everyday basis. So it's a moderate, uh, fashionable because old FIFA don't want be fashionable things. So they like to wear just a neutral color and comfortable.

✓ T-shirts are common among older people in our country; they wear them regularly. They are moderately fashionable because many older people do not want to follow fashion trends, so they prefer neutral colors and comfortable styles.

The original has multiple structural errors, incorrect words ('Tea sore', 'FIFA'), tense and agreement issues. Use clear subject-verb structure: 'T-shirts are common', 'they wear them'. Avoid incorrect nouns and ensure plural agreement. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct vocabulary ('older people', 'fashion trends'), and maintain consistent tense and agreement.

× Yeah, I did. I used to wear Tissot every day when I was a kid because my parents bought me dessert for every occasion. And we love that because my father bought me for beautiful design.

✓ Yes, I did. I used to wear T-shirts every day when I was a child because my parents bought them for me for every occasion. We loved them because my father bought them for their beautiful designs.

The student mixed tenses and used incorrect nouns and pronouns. 'Used to' is correct for past habits; 'T-shirts' plural and 'them' as object pronoun are needed. Past simple 'loved' matches 'used to'. Also correct word order: 'bought them for me' and plural 'designs'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past habits and ensure correct pronoun and plural usage.