Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“phone numbers and price”应为“phone numbers and prices”，并且可以更自然地表达。建议使用更连贯的句子结构，避免简单罗列。

例: Yes, I am quite good at remembering numbers, especially phone numbers and prices, which helps me in daily life.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和拼写错误，如“soft wars”应为“software”，“data's”应为“data”。建议使用更准确的词汇和更流畅的句子结构，同时避免重复。

例: Yes, since my major is finance, I will frequently use software to analyze data like stock prices in my future work.

提案: 回答中语法不准确，如“the studying math”应为“studying math”，“'cause”不够正式。建议使用更正式的表达，并注意时态一致。

例: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because solving difficult problems gave me a strong sense of achievement.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够准确，如“parents birthdays”应为“parents' birthdays”，“though”用法不当。建议使用更准确的表达和连贯的句子。

例: I think my parents' birthdays are very important to me because I always remember them to make sure I prepare gifts on time.

× Yes, I have a good memory, especially remembering numbers such as the phone numbers and price.

✓ Yes, I have a good memory, especially remembering numbers such as phone numbers and prices.

这里“phone numbers”和“price”在并列时，应该保持一致的复数形式，表示多个电话号码和多个价格。

× Yes, my major is finance, so I will use some soft wars to deal with the data's such as the price of stocks.

✓ Yes, my major is finance, so I will use some software to deal with data such as the prices of stocks.

“soft wars”应为“software”，是拼写错误；“data's”错误使用了所有格，应直接用复数名词“data”；“price”应为复数“prices”，因为股票价格通常有多个。

× Yes, my major is finance, so I will use some soft wars to deal with the data's such as the price of stocks.

✓ Yes, my major is finance, so I will use some software to deal with data such as the prices of stocks.

“price”应为复数形式“prices”，因为股票价格通常是多个。

× Yes, I enjoyed the studying math when I was a child 'cause when I encountered A difficulty math problem, I will feel a strong sense of achievement.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed studying math when I was a child because when I encountered a difficult math problem, I felt a strong sense of achievement.

“the studying math”中“the”不应出现，动名词前一般不加冠词；“A difficulty math problem”中“difficulty”应为形容词“difficult”，且冠词“A”应小写；时态应与过去时间一致，故“will feel”改为“felt”。

× Yes, I enjoyed the studying math when I was a child 'cause when I encountered A difficulty math problem, I will feel a strong sense of achievement.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed studying math when I was a child because when I encountered a difficult math problem, I felt a strong sense of achievement.

描述过去的经历时，动词时态应为过去时，“will feel”应改为“felt”。

× I think my parents birthdays are really important to me because I will keep them in mind though so I won't forget to prepare the gifts.

✓ I think my parents' birthdays are really important to me because I will keep them in mind so I won't forget to prepare the gifts.

“parents birthdays”应为所有格形式“parents' birthdays”，表示父母的生日。

× I think my parents birthdays are really important to me because I will keep them in mind though so I won't forget to prepare the gifts.

✓ I think my parents' birthdays are really important to me because I will keep them in mind so I won't forget to prepare the gifts.

“though”在此处使用不当，句子中已有“because”和“so”，应去掉“though”以保持句子通顺。