Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks coherence. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to connect your sentences smoothly. Also, use more natural expressions like "I'm good at" instead of "I'm very much good at."

例: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because, as a child, I often had to memorize various digits, including the population of our country. Therefore, I have developed a strong ability to recall numbers accurately.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains several errors. Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Use linking words like "because" and "therefore" properly to explain your ideas. Practice pronouncing and spelling technical terms correctly.

例: Yes, numbers will definitely be important in my future work as an armor engineer because precise measurements and calculations are essential in this field. Therefore, I will use numbers regularly in my job.

提案: Your answer has some unclear parts and grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly and use correct tenses. Also, avoid unnecessary words and focus on linking your sentences logically.

例: As a child, I didn't enjoy studying math because it was difficult to remember the concepts. However, my sister helped me by teaching me patiently, and eventually, math became easier for me.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors. Make sure to use correct subject-verb agreement and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect your thoughts.

例: The number 25 is important to me because it is my birth date. Therefore, I consider 25 to be a very lucky number.

× Yes, I'm very much good at remembering numbers because as I was a child I had to remember different digits and the population of our country.

✓ Yes, I'm very good at remembering numbers because when I was a child I had to remember different digits and the population of our country.

The phrase 'very much good' is incorrect; 'very good' is the correct form. Also, 'as I was a child' should be 'when I was a child' to indicate time correctly.

× So I'm very much good at remembering numbers.

✓ So I'm very good at remembering numbers.

'Very much good' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'very good' to describe ability or skill.

× Yes, no more should definitely be included in my future work as armor engineer myself.

✓ Yes, numbers should definitely be included in my future work as an armor engineer.

'No more should definitely be included' is incorrect and unclear. The correct modal verb usage is 'should definitely be included'. Also, 'armor engineer myself' needs an article 'an' before the profession.

× So start distichs an numbers are very important in my field.

✓ So statistics and numbers are very important in my field.

The phrase 'start distichs an numbers' seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling. The correct terms are 'statistics and numbers'.

× Therefore numbers will be surely included in my future work.

✓ Therefore, numbers will surely be included in my future work.

The adverb 'surely' should be placed before the verb 'be' for correct future tense sentence structure.

× As a child, I didn't enjoy studying math because it was very hard to remember.

✓ As a child, I didn't enjoy studying math because it was very hard to remember.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× An MET was quite hard or difficult for me so but my sister taught me math doing my only child would.

✓ Math was quite hard or difficult for me, but my sister taught me, so I could do it on my own.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It needs restructuring for clarity and correct conjunction use.

× Therefore at the end MET became easy for me.

✓ Therefore, in the end, math became easy for me.

'MET' should be 'math'. Also, 'at the end' is better expressed as 'in the end' for natural English usage.

× The numbers that are important to me is 25 as it is my both of there so I need to remember it very clearly there for 25 is a very lucky number for me.

✓ The number that is important to me is 25 as it is my birth date, so I need to remember it very clearly. Therefore, 25 is a very lucky number for me.

'Numbers' should be singular 'number' because only one number is mentioned. 'Is' agrees with singular subject. 'Both of there' is unclear and corrected to 'birth date'. 'There for' should be 'therefore'.