Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Votre réponse est claire mais vous pouvez améliorer la fluidité et la précision. Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez les répétitions. Par exemple, au lieu de dire "I think that numbers for me was too abstract", vous pouvez dire "Numbers have always seemed abstract to me". Aussi, utilisez des mots de liaison pour mieux structurer votre réponse.

例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers because they have always seemed abstract to me. For example, I often forget phone numbers and important dates because they don't feel tangible.

提案: Votre réponse manque de précision et contient des erreurs grammaticales. En français marocain, je vous conseille de faire attention à la concordance des temps et à la structure des phrases. Par exemple, dites "My future work will be mostly managerial, focusing on people rather than numbers."

例: No, I won't use numbers much in my future work because it will be mainly managerial, focusing on people and how they work.

提案: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs de temps. En français marocain, je vous suggère de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire et des détails précis. Par exemple, utilisez le passé simple ou le passé composé pour parler du passé et évitez les phrases longues et compliquées.

例: I enjoyed studying math as a child because it felt like solving a fun puzzle. However, as I grew older and studied more scientific subjects, I started to dislike it.

提案: Votre réponse contient des erreurs grammaticales et manque de clarté. En français marocain, je vous conseille de faire attention à l'accord sujet-verbe et à la formulation des phrases. Par exemple, dites "The numbers that are important to me are 7 and 5 because I consider them my lucky numbers."

例: The numbers that are important to me are 7 and 5 because I believe they are my lucky numbers.

× I think that numbers for me was too abstract.

✓ I think that numbers for me were too abstract.

The subject 'numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'were' instead of 'was' to agree in number.

× Oh no, I will not use numbers in my future works.

✓ Oh no, I will not use numbers in my future work.

The word 'work' in this context is uncountable, so 'works' is incorrect. Use 'work' without 's'.

× It's mostly managerial work so it's more focus on human and the way they work.

✓ It's mostly managerial work so it's more focused on humans and the way they work.

The verb 'focus' needs to be in the past participle form 'focused' to correctly describe the state. Also, 'human' should be plural 'humans' to refer to people generally.

× As a child, I really enjoy studying math because I was thinking it was like a game that I can resolve this equation to be honest.

✓ As a child, I really enjoyed studying math because I thought it was like a game where I could solve equations, to be honest.

The sentence mixes present tense 'enjoy' with past context 'as a child'. It should be past tense 'enjoyed'. Also, 'was thinking' should be 'thought' for simple past. 'Can resolve' should be 'could solve' to match past tense.

× But when I grow older and I pursue more scientific subjects, I detest it.

✓ But when I grew older and I pursued more scientific subjects, I detested it.

The sentence refers to past events, so verbs should be in past tense: 'grow' to 'grew', 'pursue' to 'pursued', and 'detest' to 'detested'.

× The numbers that important to me is 7 and five.

✓ The numbers that are important to me are 7 and five.

'Numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'that important' needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× Why is because I think that is 2's number are really my lucky numbers.

✓ This is because I think that the number 2 is really my lucky number.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Why is because' is incorrect; it should be 'This is because'. Also, '2's number are' is incorrect; it should be 'the number 2 is'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar.