Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“sensitive for the numbers”应为“good at numbers”，以及“choose write them down”应为“choose to write them down”。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers because they are difficult for me. Therefore, I usually write them down in my notes instead of relying on my memory.

提案: 回答不完整，句子结构不完整且有语法错误，如“maths and number is a challenge”应为“math and numbers are challenging”。建议完整表达观点，避免句子中断，并注意主谓一致。

例: I probably won't use numbers much in my future work because math and numbers are challenging for me, so I prefer to avoid tasks that involve them.

提案: 回答不完整且含糊，存在语法错误和表达不清，如“math has never been my point”应为“math has never been my strong point”，句子中断未完成。建议完整表达想法，使用正确时态和词汇。

例: I didn't enjoy studying math as a child because it was never my strong point. I often made mistakes when doing calculations, which made me lose confidence.

提案: 回答较好，但“essential number”应为“essential numbers”，且可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。建议注意单复数一致，并适当使用连接词增强连贯性。

例: The numbers ten and five are very important to me because my mom's birthday is on October 5th. This date is unforgettable, and since my mom means so much to me, I always want to show my gratitude to her.

× I'm not sensitive for the numbers.

✓ I'm not sensitive to numbers.

介词使用错误，英语中“sensitive”后面应接介词“to”，表示对某事敏感。应使用“sensitive to”而非“sensitive for”。

× I will choose write them down on my notes instead of rely on my memory.

✓ I will choose to write them down in my notes instead of relying on my memory.

动词后接动词不定式或动名词时需正确使用形式。这里“choose”后应接不定式“to write”，而“instead of”后应接动名词“relying”。

× I know maths and number is a challenge for me so I will avoid using numbers in my future work.

✓ I know maths and numbers are a challenge for me so I will avoid using numbers in my future work.

主语“numbers”应为复数，谓语动词也应相应使用复数形式“are”。

× More importantly.

✓ More importantly,

句子结构不完整，“More importantly”作为连接词组，应后接逗号并引出完整句子。

× When I was a child I do Poly calculations so I always made mistakes when.

✓ When I was a child, I did poly calculations, so I always made mistakes.

时态错误，描述过去的动作应使用过去时“did”。句子末尾不完整，应删除“when”或补充完整。

× Ten and five are the essential number for me since my mom's birthday is on October 5th.

✓ Ten and five are the essential numbers for me since my mom's birthday is on October 5th.

“numbers”应为复数形式，因为提到了两个数字。

× I will choose write them down on my notes instead of rely on my memory.

✓ I will choose to write them down in my notes instead of relying on my memory.

介词使用错误，英语中“notes”前应使用“in”而非“on”，表示写在笔记里。