Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by directly addressing the question. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear references. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I am good at remembering important numbers like my family's phone numbers and license numbers. However, I sometimes forget less important numbers, such as complaint reference numbers.

提案: Improve your grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repetition.

例: I believe numbers are essential in any job because they help with statistics and analysis. For example, dates and figures are important to keep track of progress and results.

提案: Make your answer complete and clear. Avoid trailing off and provide specific reasons with linking words to explain your feelings.

例: No, I did not enjoy studying math as a child because my teacher often criticized me, and I felt very anxious during exams, which caused stomach pain and nausea.

提案: Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific details to enrich your answer.

例: The numbers that are most important to me are examination dates, which I must not miss, and my salary figures, as they help me manage my daily expenses. Other numbers are less significant in my life.

× Numbers is crucial part of every work.

✓ Numbers are a crucial part of every work.

The subject 'Numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'a crucial part' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'crucial part'.

× Every work needs statistics, needs analysis.

✓ Every work needs statistics and analysis.

The phrase 'needs analysis' is awkward; 'analysis' is uncountable here and should be connected with 'and' to 'statistics'. Also, 'needs' is correctly singular here because 'Every work' is singular.

× And there should be numbers, dates, everything.

✓ And there should be numbers, dates, and everything else.

Adding 'and' before the last item in a list is standard. 'Everything' is singular and can be clarified as 'everything else' for better flow.

× Yeah, any numbers is part of life.

✓ Yeah, any numbers are part of life.

'Numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'.

× Numbers of examination dates are very important not to be missed and of course numbers of salary and income to live our daily life.

✓ The numbers of examination dates are very important not to be missed, and of course the numbers of salary and income are important to live our daily life.

'Numbers' is plural and requires plural verbs. Also, 'numbers of salary and income' needs the definite article 'the' for clarity, and the sentence needs a verb for the second clause.