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Part 1

試験官

Are you good at remembering numbers?

受験者

Absolutely not. I'm not good at remembering numbers because I've always struggled with maths. Besides, my memory in general is quite weak so it's difficult for me to recoil long sequences of numbers.

試験官

Will you use numbers in your future work?

受験者

Of course, numbers are very useful in our daily life. No matter I will do what kind of jobs in the future. I think using numbers in my future work is essential and meaningful.

試験官

Did you enjoy studying math as a child?

受験者

Definitely not when I was a kid. I'm always struggled with mass until after I finished my high school degree. Learning math is too difficult to me, It's really hard.

試験官

Which numbers are important to you?

受験者

I think it must be the number one because, uh, in one hand, my birthday involve this number and the other end, uh, one is a symbol of the best one. It's very simple.

評価

総合

総合: 6.0流暢さと一貫性: 6.0発音: 6.0文法: 5.5語彙: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at remembering numbers?

スコア: 70.0

提案: 回答时语法和用词有些错误,如“recoil”应为“recall”,且句子结构略显冗长。建议简化表达,避免重复,同时注意单词拼写和搭配。

: No, I'm not good at remembering numbers because I've always found math challenging. Also, my memory isn't very strong, so recalling long sequences of numbers is difficult for me.

Will you use numbers in your future work?

スコア: 65.0

提案: 回答中语法错误较多,如“No matter I will do what kind of jobs”不通顺。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并且句子结构应更清晰。

: Yes, I believe I will use numbers in my future job because they are essential in everyday life, regardless of the type of work I do.

Did you enjoy studying math as a child?

スコア: 60.0

提案: 语法错误明显,如“I'm always struggled”应为“I always struggled”,且“mass”应为“math”。建议注意时态和单词拼写,表达更准确。

: Definitely not. I always struggled with math until I finished high school because I found it very difficult.

Which numbers are important to you?

スコア: 70.0

提案: 回答中表达不够流畅,使用了口语填充词“uh”,且句子结构不够清晰。建议减少口语填充词,使用更连贯的句子。

: The number one is important to me because it appears in my birthday, and it also symbolizes being the best.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× ...it's difficult for me to recoil long sequences of numbers.

...it's difficult for me to recall long sequences of numbers.

这里单词'recoil'用错了,正确的动词是'recall',表示“回忆”。这是词汇错误,不属于语法问题,但根据题目要求只纠正语法问题,因此不做修改。

Modal verb usage

× No matter I will do what kind of jobs in the future.

No matter what kind of job I will do in the future.

'No matter'后面应接完整的从句,且'jobs'应为单数形式'job',这里涉及到量词和句子结构问题。根据题目要求只纠正语法问题,故纠正为'No matter what kind of job I will do in the future.'

Past tense issue

× I'm always struggled with mass until after I finished my high school degree.

I always struggled with math until I finished my high school degree.

'I'm always struggled'时态错误,'always'与过去时连用应为'I always struggled'。另外,'mass'应为'math',但词汇错误不在语法问题范围内。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Learning math is too difficult to me, It's really hard.

Learning math is too difficult for me, it's really hard.

'difficult'后应接介词'for'而非'to',这是介词使用错误。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× ...my birthday involve this number and the other end, uh, one is a symbol of the best one.

...my birthday involves this number and on the other hand, one is a symbol of the best one.

'involve'主语是'singular',应为'involves',且短语应为'on the other hand',这里涉及动词单复数和固定短语使用错误。

重要語彙

BestFinest; To the highest standard
DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
SimpleStraightforward; Clear; Plain; Candid
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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