Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but contains hesitations and redundancy. Try to be more concise and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Also, clarify your points directly and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I am good at remembering numbers because I have been memorizing legal articles for the past eight years, which requires me to recall many numbers accurately.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. Also, be more specific about how you will use numbers in your work.

例: Currently, I am studying law, and I will likely use numbers such as article numbers in my future work. Besides that, numbers like phone numbers and bank account numbers are important in daily life.

提案: Your answer is honest but somewhat disorganized and repetitive. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid fragmented sentences.

例: Honestly, I did not enjoy studying math as a child because I found it difficult to remember formulas. That is one of the reasons I chose to study law instead.

提案: Your answer includes relevant examples but is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Use linking words to organize your ideas and check grammar for clarity.

例: The most important numbers to me are my bank account number, my boyfriend's phone number, and emergency contact numbers, as they are essential in daily life.

× maybe I'll use numbers that is articles article number in my future work.

✓ maybe I'll use numbers that are articles' article numbers in my future work.

The subject 'numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'articles article number' is unclear and should be plural possessive 'articles' article numbers' to indicate numbers belonging to articles.

× personally I think everyone does use number in their life like phone number and their bank account.

✓ personally I think everyone does use numbers in their life like phone numbers and their bank accounts.

The word 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple types of numbers such as phone numbers and bank account numbers.

× All the money you count. I think that's all included in numbers.

✓ All the money you count, I think that's all included in numbers.

This is a sentence fragment; it should be combined into one sentence for clarity. Also, 'money' is uncountable, so 'all the money you count' is acceptable but needs to be connected properly.

× I cannot remember all those formulas so I did not enjoy studying maths As.

✓ I could not remember all those formulas so I did not enjoy studying maths.

The modal verb 'cannot' in past context should be 'could not'. Also, 'As' at the end is unnecessary and should be removed.

× the numbers that are important to me is the number in my bank account.

✓ the numbers that are important to me are the numbers in my bank account.

The subject 'numbers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'number in my bank account' should be plural 'numbers in my bank account' if referring to multiple numbers.