Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ 'I'm not good at' แทน 'I don't good at' และควรหลีกเลี่ยงการซ้ำซ้อนโดยการรวมข้อมูลให้กระชับขึ้น

例: No, I'm not good at memorizing numbers. Usually, I can only remember 4 to 6 digits at a time, and I tend to forget them after a few days.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหล เช่น ใช้ 'because I work as an engineer' และ 'sometimes' แทน 'sometime' รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อความสมูธของคำตอบ

例: Yes, of course. Because I work as an engineer, I have to calculate many things in my projects. Also, sometimes I analyze statistical data to improve my work.

提案: คำตอบดีแล้วแต่ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'formulas' แทน 'formula' และปรับปรุงการใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'which made me feel pressured and frustrated'

例: No, I didn't enjoy studying math when I was young. I found it quite challenging because I had to memorize many formulas and solve difficult problems, which made me feel pressured and frustrated.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และความชัดเจนของประโยค เช่น ใช้ 'I needed to create' แทน 'I need to create' และปรับประโยคให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น พร้อมใช้ linking words เพื่อความสมูธ

例: There is a set of three-digit numbers that are really meaningful to me. In the past, I needed to create a unique password that wouldn't be used by others, so I came up with these numbers and have been using them ever since.

× No, I don't good at memorizing numbers.

✓ No, I'm not good at memorizing numbers.

The verb 'do' cannot be directly followed by an adjective like 'good'. Instead, the correct form is to use the verb 'to be' with the adjective, so 'I am not good'. This is a common mistake when negating adjectives in English.

× At most I can only remember 4 to 6 digits per time and only a few days before I forget about it.

✓ At most, I can only remember 4 to 6 digits at a time and only for a few days before I forget them.

The phrase 'per time' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'at a time'. Also, 'a few days before I forget about it' should be 'for a few days before I forget them' because 'digits' is plural and requires a plural pronoun.

× Yes, of course I work as an engineer so I have to calculate many things in my project.

✓ Yes, of course, I work as an engineer, so I have to calculate many things in my projects.

The sentence is missing commas for clarity, and 'project' should be plural 'projects' if referring generally. The modal verb 'have to' is used correctly here, so no change needed for modal verb usage, but punctuation and plural form are corrected.

× Also sometime I may analyze the data from the statistics for to improve my project.

✓ Also, sometimes I may analyze data from statistics to improve my project.

The adverb 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The phrase 'for to improve' is incorrect; it should be 'to improve'. Also, 'the data' and 'the statistics' can be simplified to 'data' and 'statistics' unless referring to specific ones.

× No, I didn't enjoy studying math when I was young.

✓ No, I didn't enjoy studying math when I was young.

This sentence is correct in past tense; no correction needed.

× I found it quite challenging because I had to memorize plenty of formula and solve difficult problems, which made me feel pressure and frustrated.

✓ I found it quite challenging because I had to memorize plenty of formulas and solve difficult problems, which made me feel pressured and frustrated.

The plural of 'formula' is 'formulas' in this context. Also, 'pressure' is a noun; the correct adjective to describe feelings is 'pressured'.

× There is a set of three digit numbers which is really meaningful to me.

✓ There is a set of three-digit numbers which is really meaningful to me.

The phrase 'three digit' should be hyphenated as 'three-digit' when used as a compound adjective before a noun.

× In the past I need to create a unique password which done didn't repeat others and I come up with these numbers and I keep using them until now.

✓ In the past, I needed to create a unique password which didn't repeat others, and I came up with these numbers and have kept using them until now.

The verbs 'need', 'done', and 'come' are incorrectly used in present tense or form. They should be in past tense: 'needed', 'didn't', 'came'. Also, 'keep using' should be present perfect 'have kept using' to indicate an action continuing until now.