Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep it concise. Instead of repeating the idea of good memory twice, focus on explaining your method briefly with linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I'm good at remembering numbers because I use mnemonics; for instance, if I read a number once or twice, I can recall the entire sequence easily.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and coherent. Use linking words properly and avoid awkward phrasing like 'a daily mathematics'. Also, be more specific about how you will use numbers in your future work.

例: Definitely, I will use numbers in my future work because they are fundamental in mathematics and engineering; for example, I will apply numerical data when assessing exams or solving engineering problems.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by correcting grammar ('when I was a child') and making the last sentence clearer. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Definitely, maths was my favorite subject when I was a child because I loved solving numerical equations and complex theorems; moreover, my mathematics teacher inspired me a lot.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and ends abruptly. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid trailing off. Also, use linking words to connect the two parts of your answer clearly.

例: If I talk in mathematical terms, natural and whole numbers are the most important; however, in daily life, I need to remember my ID card number and my parents' phone numbers.

× Definitely, numbers are the fundamental concept of a daily mathematics and engineering.

✓ Definitely, numbers are the fundamental concept of daily mathematics and engineering.

The definite article 'a' is incorrectly used before 'daily mathematics and engineering' because these are uncountable or general fields of study. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Definitely. Maths was my favorite subject when I was child because I love solving numerical equations and complex theorems.

✓ Definitely. Maths was my favorite subject when I was a child because I loved solving numerical equations and complex theorems.

The phrase 'when I was child' is missing the article 'a' before 'child'. Also, the verb 'love' should be in past tense 'loved' to match the past time frame indicated by 'was my favorite subject'.

× Moreover, my favorite teacher was also my mathematics professor.

✓ Moreover, my favorite teacher was also my mathematics professor.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× If I talk in mathematical terms, natural and whole numbers are the most important ones. However, in daily life I have to remember my ID card number and call numbers for my parents and.

✓ If I talk in mathematical terms, natural and whole numbers are the most important ones. However, in daily life I have to remember my ID card number and phone numbers for my parents.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete. Also, 'call numbers' is incorrect; the correct term is 'phone numbers'. Removing the trailing 'and' and replacing 'call numbers' with 'phone numbers' corrects the sentence.