Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更自然流畅，避免重复表达“numbers”，并且回答应更直接。可以简洁表达自己的观点，同时给出原因。

例: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers because I don't find them interesting, although I understand their importance.

提案: 回答时应避免重复使用“so”，并且句子结构应更简洁。可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I will use numbers occasionally in my future work because my major, art management, involves learning economic strategies.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。应避免使用“maybe you would find become smarter”，改为更准确的表达。

例: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I found it interesting and believed it could help me become smarter.

提案: 回答缺少主语，且表达不够连贯。应注意句子完整性和逻辑连接，避免重复词汇。

例: I think zero is very important because it symbolizes both the beginning and the end, which makes it meaningful to me.

× Actually, no, because I'm not interested in remembering the numbers.

✓ Actually, no, because I'm not interested in remembering numbers.

在英语中，'interested in'后面接动名词形式，且通常不加定冠词'the'，除非特指某些数字。这里应去掉'the'。

× So I have to use the numbers in my future work, I think.

✓ So I have to use numbers in my future work, I think.

在表达泛指时，通常不加定冠词'the'，'use numbers'更自然。

× if you learned the math, maybe you would find become smarter, I think.

✓ if you learn math, maybe you would become smarter, I think.

条件句中，表示一般现在时应使用一般现在时态'learn'，而不是过去式'learned'。此外，'find become'结构不正确，应改为'would become'。

× Is a symbol of start and symbol of the end, so it it is very meaningful for me.

✓ It is a symbol of the start and the end, so it is very meaningful for me.

句子缺少主语，应加上'It'。'start'和'end'前应加定冠词'the'，且重复的'it'应删除。