Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để tránh lỗi nhỏ như "others number" nên là "other numbers". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers. However, I can usually memorize important ones like my phone number and bank account details because they are essential. On the other hand, I find it difficult to remember other numbers unless I write them down.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ "cow" có thể là lỗi đánh máy hoặc phát âm sai của "count". Câu trả lời cũng hơi lủng củng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, in my future work as a teacher, I will definitely use numbers because they are fundamental for students to understand basic math concepts. For example, I will teach them how to count and perform simple calculations, which are essential skills in everyday life.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ "I not truly drawn" nên là "I was truly drawn" hoặc "I really liked". Ngoài ra, tránh dùng từ "might" khi nói về điều chắc chắn trong quá khứ. Sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I really enjoyed studying math when I was a child because I was truly drawn to numbers and problem solving. I could do calculations quickly, which boosted my confidence and motivated me to learn more. Moreover, studying math helped me improve my logical thinking and concentration.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp số ít và số nhiều, ví dụ "mark" nên là "marks", "remind" nên là "reminds", "hold" nên là "holds". Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: For me, my birthday number is very important as it marks the day I was born, which I will never forget. It also reminds me of special memories with my family and friends. Therefore, this number holds a lot of personal meaning in my life.

× I find it difficult to remember others number unless I write them down.

✓ I find it difficult to remember others' numbers unless I write them down.

The word 'others' is a plural possessive, so it should be followed by a plural noun 'numbers' and an apostrophe to indicate possession. The original sentence incorrectly uses the singular 'number' without possession.

× In my future work at this teacher, I will definitely use numbers because they are fundamental for students to understand basic math concepts.

✓ In my future work as a teacher, I will definitely use numbers because they are fundamental for students to understand basic math concepts.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'as' to indicate the role or position of being a teacher.

× For example, I will teach them how to cow and perform simple calculations, which are essential skills in the day.

✓ For example, I will teach them how to count and perform simple calculations, which are essential skills in the day.

The word 'cow' is a typo or incorrect word; the correct verb is 'count' when referring to numbers.

× Everyday life is very important.

✓ Everyday life is very important.

The phrase 'Everyday life is very important.' is a fragment and unclear in context. It should be connected to the previous sentence or clarified. However, since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes from the list, this is acceptable.

× I really enjoyed studying math when I was a child as I not truly drawn to numbers and problem solving.

✓ I really enjoyed studying math when I was a child as I was truly drawn to numbers and problem solving.

The phrase 'I not truly drawn' is incorrect. The correct past tense form is 'I was truly drawn' to indicate past state.

× I could do calculations quickly which boost my confidence and motivate me to learn more.

✓ I could do calculations quickly which boosted my confidence and motivated me to learn more.

The verbs 'boost' and 'motivate' should be in past tense 'boosted' and 'motivated' to agree with the past context indicated by 'could'.

× And studying might help me improve logical thinking and concentration.

✓ And studying might help me improve logical thinking and concentration.

The sentence is correct in modal verb usage; no correction needed.

× For me, my birthday number is very important as it mark the day I was born which I will never forget.

✓ For me, my birthday number is very important as it marks the day I was born which I will never forget.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'marks' to agree in number.

× It also remind me of special memories with my family and friends.

✓ It also reminds me of special memories with my family and friends.

The singular subject 'It' requires the verb 'reminds' in third person singular form.

× Therefore, this number hold a lot of personal meaning in my life.

✓ Therefore, this number holds a lot of personal meaning in my life.

The singular subject 'number' requires the verb 'holds' in third person singular form.