Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, and avoid redundancy. Use correct grammar and vocabulary related to numbers and memory.

例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers because I find math challenging. Therefore, I usually write numbers down with a pencil to help me remember them.

提案: Your answer is relevant but has some repetition and minor grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how you use numbers in your work.

例: Yes, I will use numbers in my future work because they help me keep accurate records. For example, I often use numbers to track sales and expenses.

提案: Your answer repeats ideas and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear opinion with supporting reasons, and use correct tense and sentence structure.

例: No, I did not enjoy studying math as a child because I found it difficult. As a result, I often felt frustrated and lost interest in the subject.

提案: Your answer is relevant but unclear and contains grammar mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain why the number is important using linking words.

例: The most important number to me is my birthday because it is a special day. I usually celebrate it with my family and friends, which makes me very happy.

× Not really because I am not gonna mathematics.

✓ Not really because I am not good at mathematics.

The phrase 'gonna' is an informal contraction of 'going to' and is incorrectly used here. The correct expression is 'good at mathematics' to indicate ability or skill. Replace 'gonna' with 'good at' to correct the sentence.

× So when I should remember some numbers I used, I used my pencils and not to write it down.

✓ So when I need to remember some numbers, I use my pencils to write them down.

The original sentence has incorrect verb tense and structure. 'Should remember' is incorrect here; 'need to remember' fits better. Also, 'I used my pencils and not to write it down' is awkward and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence uses present tense and proper infinitive form for clarity.

× Yes, when I work I usually use numbers because it it allows me to record details of my work.

✓ Yes, when I work I usually use numbers because it allows me to record details of my work.

There is a repeated word 'it it' which is a typographical error. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× So I don't I didn't like studying mathematics.

✓ So I didn't like studying mathematics.

The phrase 'I don't I didn't' is incorrect and redundant. Since the sentence refers to the past, 'didn't like' is appropriate. Removing 'I don't' corrects the tense and structure.

× When I encounter the day, I can spend my day enjoyably, so I arrange wait for this day.

✓ When the day comes, I can spend it enjoyably, so I wait for this day.

'Encounter the day' is unnatural; 'when the day comes' is the correct expression. Also, 'arrange wait for this day' is incorrect; 'wait for this day' is appropriate. The sentence is restructured for naturalness and correctness.