Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains hesitations and some grammatical errors. To improve, try to speak more fluently without filler words like 'uh' and use correct grammar. Also, make your answer more concise and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then providing a specific example.

例: I'm not very good at remembering numbers. For example, when my mom first told me her phone number, I had to spend three days memorizing it by writing it down repeatedly.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and hesitations. To improve, avoid filler words, use correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words for coherence.

例: Yes, I will use numbers in my future work because I am majoring in accounting and want to become an accountant. Therefore, I will often work with financial reports that contain many numbers.

提案: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. To improve, use correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and provide clear supporting details. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: Yes, I enjoyed studying math as a child because I was good at it. For instance, I often scored high marks in my math final exams, which made me enjoy the subject even more.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and hesitations. To improve, speak more fluently, use correct grammar, and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

例: The number seven is important to me because my birthday is on July 7th. Therefore, I consider seven to be my lucky number and often choose it as my favorite number.

× I was enjoy studying maths as a child because I'm quite good at studying maths.

✓ I enjoyed studying maths as a child because I'm quite good at studying maths.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in the past tense 'enjoyed' to match the past time frame indicated by 'as a child'. Using 'was enjoy' is incorrect because 'enjoy' is not a verb that typically uses the continuous form in this context.

× So number is the key part of this measure.

✓ So numbers are the key part of this measure.

The noun 'number' should be plural 'numbers' because it refers to multiple numbers in accounting. Also, the verb should agree in number: 'numbers are' instead of 'number is'.

× So I will face a lot of, uh, financial report which including the huge number inside.

✓ So I will face a lot of financial reports which include huge numbers inside.

The phrase 'financial report' should be plural 'financial reports' to match 'a lot of'. The verb 'including' should be 'include' to agree with the plural subject 'reports'. Also, 'the huge number inside' is better as 'huge numbers inside' for clarity and agreement.

× I think the number 7th is in important to me because I'm my birthday is the July 7, so I think the seven is the lucky number for me.

✓ I think the number 7 is important to me because my birthday is July 7, so I think seven is my lucky number.

The ordinal '7th' is unnecessary here; 'number 7' is sufficient. 'In important' is incorrect; it should be 'important'. The phrase 'I'm my birthday is the July 7' is incorrect; it should be 'my birthday is July 7'. Also, 'the seven' should be 'seven' and 'the lucky number for me' is better as 'my lucky number' for natural expression.

× I spent like 3 days and uh, copy the, the phone number one by ones.

✓ I spent like 3 days copying the phone number one by one.

The verb 'copy' should be in the gerund form 'copying' after 'spent'. The phrase 'one by ones' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'one by one'.

× I wanna become a accountant.

✓ I want to become an accountant.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a word starting with a vowel sound like 'accountant'. Also, 'wanna' is informal; 'want to' is more appropriate in this context.