Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide a specific reason or example. Use linking words to improve coherence.

例: No, I'm not very good at remembering numbers because they often look similar to me. For example, I sometimes confuse phone numbers or codes, which makes it difficult to recall them accurately.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains many grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain how you will use numbers, using linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, I will use numbers in my future work because data analysis is important. For instance, I will use statistics to interpret information and make decisions based on the results.

提案: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples, using linking words to connect your ideas.

例: No, I did not enjoy studying math as a child because I found the methods repetitive and difficult to understand. Moreover, I preferred using a calculator rather than doing calculations manually.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but lacks fluency and contains grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific examples, using linking words to improve coherence.

例: The numbers that are important to me include passwords for my email and apps, as well as my home address number and birth date. These numbers are essential for security and identification purposes.

× No, I'm not good to remember a number because I think it's the same thing in the number, not.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering numbers because I think it's the same thing with the numbers.

The phrase 'good to remember' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at' followed by a gerund ('remembering'). Also, 'in the number' should be 'with the numbers' to express the relationship properly.

× No, I'm not good to remember a number because I think it's the same thing in the number, not.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering numbers because I think it's the same thing with the numbers, not helping me to remember what comes first and what comes after.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper conjunctions. Adding 'helping me to remember what comes first and what comes after' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yes, I will use the number in the future works because is a data, we we use the the many data.

✓ Yes, I will use numbers in my future work because it is data; we use a lot of data.

'Number' should be plural 'numbers' to match the context. 'Future works' should be singular 'future work'. 'Is a data' is incorrect because 'data' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is'. 'The the many data' is incorrect; 'a lot of data' is appropriate.

× Data in my works is use the certif statistic to do that and we.

✓ In my work, I use certified statistics to do that.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rephrasing it to 'In my work, I use certified statistics to do that' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× No, I don't like math because I don't understand is the same method of math and I don't too far by the fast calculator.

✓ No, I don't like math because I don't understand the same methods of math, and I don't go too far with the fast calculator.

The phrase 'I don't understand is the same method' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't understand the same methods'. 'I don't too far by the fast calculator' is unclear; 'I don't go too far with the fast calculator' is a better expression. Modal verb 'don't' is used correctly but the sentence needs restructuring.

× The number that important to me is the password, like a go to the emails or and any apps and also the address number, the birth date.

✓ The numbers that are important to me are passwords, like those to access emails or any apps, and also address numbers and birth dates.

'Number' should be plural 'numbers' to match the list. 'That important' needs the verb 'are'. 'Password' should be plural 'passwords' to match the context. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.