Number— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and degree), correct grammar, avoid redundancy, and give one specific example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I'm fairly good at remembering numbers. For example, I can usually recall the six-digit codes sent to my phone for online banking, which I use almost every day, so I practise remembering them regularly.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence and complete the idea with specific details. Fix grammar (e.g., 'assess' and complete the phrase 'under various conditions'). Use a linking phrase to expand (for example).

例: Yes, I will definitely use numbers in my future work. For example, as a structural engineer I rely on measurements and calculations to assess how materials perform under various conditions, such as load or temperature, to ensure safety.

提案: Keep the answer natural and concise. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a brief contrast using a linking word (however/now).

例: No, I didn't really enjoy studying math as a child, even though I was good at it. I think this was because I couldn't see its practical use; however, now I appreciate math because I apply it daily at work.

提案: Be specific and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give a brief reason and one concrete example. Use a linking word (for example/for instance) to clarify why those numbers matter.

例: Family dates are the most important numbers to me. For instance, I always remember my parents' and girlfriend's birthdays because forgetting them would cause personal problems and hurt feelings.

× I wish I am fairly good at remembering 6 digits number because most passwords on my bank account send my phone requires 6 digit numbers.

✓ I wish I were fairly good at remembering 6-digit numbers because most passwords for my bank account or messages sent to my phone require 6-digit numbers.

The sentence has multiple issues that match items in the provided list; primarily the use of 'I wish I am' is incorrect for wishes about present unreal situations and requires the subjunctive 'I wish I were' (this falls under present subjunctive usage, treated here as present participle/verb form issue). Also plural and hyphenation are wrong: '6 digits number' should be '6-digit numbers' (singular/plural and adjective form). Prepositions and sentence structure were adjusted: 'passwords on my bank account send my phone' is ungrammatical, corrected to 'passwords for my bank account or messages sent to my phone'. Suggestion: use 'I wish I were' for hypothetical present wishes, hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns (6-digit), and ensure noun plurality matches (numbers).

× Yes, especially if I continue my job as a structural engineer because we use numbers for everything to see and access how the materials perform under various.

✓ Yes, especially if I continue my job as a structural engineer, because we use numbers for everything to see and assess how the materials perform under various conditions.

The original sentence ends abruptly and uses an incorrect verb 'access' instead of 'assess' (word choice), and omits the object after 'various'. The tense 'if I continue' is fine for a future possibility, but the sentence needed completion and proper vocabulary. Suggestion: use 'assess' when evaluating performance, add the noun 'conditions' after 'various', and include a comma before the subordinate clause for clarity.

× I surprisingly didn't enjoy learning math back then, even though I was quite good at it.

✓ I surprisingly didn't enjoy learning math back then, even though I was quite good at it.

This sentence is already correct in past tense: 'didn't enjoy' and 'was' correctly express past time. No change is needed. Keep using simple past to describe past feelings and abilities.

× I think it might be because I didn't see how I could use it in my daily life, which is quite different from now.

✓ I think it might be because I didn't see how I could use it in my daily life, which is quite different now.

The clause 'which is quite different from now' is awkward; 'different now' is more natural and concise. This is a sentence structure/style improvement rather than a strict grammatical error. Suggestion: prefer 'different now' for clarity and brevity.

× There are many sets of numbers that are important to me, but the most important ones are probably the birthdays of my family members and my girlfriend.

✓ There are many sets of numbers that are important to me, but the most important ones are probably the birthdays of my family members and my girlfriend's.

The original is mostly correct, but to be parallel and possessive it's clearer to say 'my girlfriend's' to mean 'my girlfriend's birthdays'. Alternatively, keep 'my girlfriend' if referring to a single birthday; choose possessive for consistency. This concerns the use of 'there are' which is correctly used here; the suggested change improves possessive clarity.

× If I forget them, I could get into trouble.

✓ If I forget them, I could get into trouble.

This conditional sentence is acceptable: 'could' expresses a possible result. No grammatical change is required. Suggestion: 'might' is also possible depending on speaker certainty.