News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit long and has some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question first, then adding a reason with linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, I am interested in news, especially during election times because I like to stay updated on political developments. However, on regular days, I prefer watching sports channels as I am more into sports.

提案: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using better linking words and more precise vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating words like 'my news' and try to make sentences more fluent and natural.

例: I usually get my news on my mobile by scrolling through social media platforms like Instagram and Facebook. Additionally, I sometimes watch television to stay informed.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and be specific about your reasons.

例: To be honest, I am not interested in becoming a journalist. Although my father is inspired by journalists and wanted me to pursue this career, I declined because I have no passion for it.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words to connect ideas smoothly and by avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more natural expressions.

例: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was busy preparing for my speaking test and revising some topics, so I didn't have time to watch the news.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use correct prepositions and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details.

例: Sometimes, my friends and I discuss the news when it is interesting or related to politics. Most of my friends are interested in politics, so we often share our views during such discussions.

× I would say definitely during the election time I mostly watch news channels but during the casual days on normal days I don't prefer to watch news becauses I am more into the sport so I usually watched you those sports channel rather than these.

✓ I would say definitely during the election time I mostly watch news channels but during casual or normal days I don't prefer to watch news because I am more into sports so I usually watch those sports channels rather than these.

The modal verb 'would' is correctly used here to express a polite or tentative statement. However, the sentence contains other errors such as incorrect verb tense 'watched' which should be 'watch' to maintain present tense consistency, and incorrect preposition 'becauses' which should be 'because'. Also, 'you those sports channel' is incorrect and should be 'those sports channels'. The modal verb usage itself is correct but surrounding verb forms and prepositions need correction.

× I usually watched you those sports channel rather than these.

✓ I usually watch those sports channels rather than these.

The verb 'watched' is in past tense but the adverb 'usually' indicates a habitual action which requires present simple tense 'watch'. Also, 'you those sports channel' is incorrect and should be 'those sports channels' to match plural form.

× I mostly use my mobile to get my most of the news as I have habit of scrolling social media platforms like Instagram or Facebook.

✓ I mostly use my mobile to get most of my news as I have a habit of scrolling through social media platforms like Instagram or Facebook.

The phrase 'have habit of' is missing the article 'a' and the preposition 'of' should be followed by 'scrolling through' to indicate the action on platforms. Also, 'my most of the news' is incorrect; it should be 'most of my news'.

× So most of my news are from here or sometimes I also watch television for my news.

✓ So most of my news is from here or sometimes I also watch television for my news.

The word 'news' is an uncountable noun and takes singular verb 'is' instead of plural 'are'.

× To be honest I don't have any interest to be a journalist but my father really wanted me to pick up my 1 becauses he was he is really inspired by them and he asked me to go to do this course and join this job but I refused to him because I had no in.

✓ To be honest, I don't have any interest in being a journalist but my father really wanted me to pick up this because he is really inspired by them and he asked me to do this course and join this job but I refused him because I had no interest.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and article errors: 'pick up my 1' is unclear and corrected to 'pick up this'; 'becauses' corrected to 'because'; 'he was he is' simplified to 'he is'; 'refused to him' corrected to 'refused him'; 'had no in' corrected to 'had no interest'. Pronouns and articles must be used correctly to convey clear meaning.

× No, I have not read the news this morning as I was preparing for my speaking test and I was revising some of the topics so I didn't get the time to watch the news.

✓ No, I have not read the news this morning as I was preparing for my speaking test and revising some of the topics so I didn't get time to watch the news.

The sentence is mostly correct in tense usage. 'Have not read' is present perfect for an action relevant to the present morning. 'Was preparing' and 'was revising' are past continuous for past actions. 'Didn't get the time' is acceptable but 'didn't get time' is more natural. No modal or tense errors here.

× Sometimes we discuss about the news when it is interesting or related to the politics.

✓ Sometimes we discuss the news when it is interesting or related to politics.

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, 'the politics' is incorrect; 'politics' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'the'.

× Most of my friends are marching to the politics and they often share their. Views on it an this is the only time when we talk about it.

✓ Most of my friends are interested in politics and they often share their views on it and this is the only time when we talk about it.

The phrase 'marching to the politics' is incorrect; likely intended 'interested in politics'. 'Politics' is uncountable and does not take 'the'. Also, 'their. Views' should be 'their views' and 'an' corrected to 'and'. These corrections fix plural and preposition errors.